Title: AWWW
Reviewed By: Tear Alchemist [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 08:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww....no more? I thought it was pretty funny,....even though I would suggest you change it so that evey time a character speaks it begins a new paragragh, I hope you update it! ^_^ -Tear
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