| "Kagome's scars" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: kagomes scars
Reviewed By: queenkikyo_kinginuyasha15 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 22:59 CST
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what happen i need to know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 04:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH COME ON!! HURRY UP AND REVIEW!! ITS AUSOM!!
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Reviewed By: Full_Blue_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 15:14 CDT
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Yea a real DUN DUN DUNN! And Hell yea i do hate cliffys OH WELL that just makes it all the more interesting...but also makes me kinda want to kill you if ya don't hurry up! SO PLZ HURRY!? And also i would suggest to watch your back...this is a really well writen story and loads of people like to rip others off...the little a@@#$%^&*. C'ya, Shelby (aka well ya know rite? i hope so by now and for later on!)
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Reviewed By: Full_Blue_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 14:51 CDT
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WEE HOO! i wonder what could posibly happen next!?!?! Kagome surely has a lot to explan? rite? yea so i wonder what it will be that shes uses as an excuse?! Anyways great so far! Good Job a real give-your-self-a-pat-on-the-back! C'ya, Shelby (aka Full_Blue_Moon)
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 18:44 CST
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update asap plz
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2005 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its great! plz update!
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 06:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update! you've got a great start here! urrghh...I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED NEXT!!! =D
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Reviewed By: ChaosReborn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
~Hey there... this is a great fic, and I'd love to read more, but I'm also going to have to agree with your first reviewer: Whenever a character speaks, can you show it by using quotation marks? It makes the story easier to follow, and makes it flow better. Plus, you can have multiple sentences on one line. For example (this is off the top of my head, so its gonna be lame): Inuyasha was very worried about Kagome. "Hey, girl! What's wrong?" he demanded. ~It's just easier to read than if those two sentences were on different lines. ~Don't think I'm flaming you, because I'm SO not. Like I said, your story is really good... I just wanted to give you some tips to make it better (you know... from one struggling writer to another hahaha). Keep up the good work, and update soon!
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Title: AHHHHH
Reviewed By: Hanyougal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 00:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i love it already! But umm not trying to flame but do you think mybe when someone is speaking you could put quotations around it please? Anyways its great Mwah (gives kisses) wah mwah! Neways thanks for such a greatstory love yah!
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