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| "Memories" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Hiei098 On: March 28, 2005 15:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was one of the best fan fictions i have ever read. Keep writing!
| Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 14:56 CST
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YES! CLOSURE! Domo arigato gozaimasu! I couldn't stand the way they left oodles of loose ends when the anime was over. The fact that you use so much of the japanese terminology really makes it feel like a continuation of the actual show instead of some random fic made up by a fan desperate for a real ending. Just so we're clear, Al doesn't remember the four years they spent looking for the philosopher's stone, Al and Ed's father can't use alchemy anymore and is mortal, and Ed doesn't remember Al, his dad, and the majority of his journey. Seems like a kinda steep prics if you ask me. Anyway, the thing i'm confused about, is that he remembers all of the military personel, so he must remember some of his time as a state alchemist, but he doesn't remember Al? Al was such an integral part of those memories, I have a hard time imagining how he could have been taken out, but the memories left itact. Oh well, i guess i'll just accept it, and enjoy finally having some closure! Thanks again. You did a wonderful job! I don't think this needs to be continued, since it's pretty much all wrapped up, but if you feel a burning desire to give Ed his memories back, or something, then go for it! Well, i guess that's all i really wanted to say, so I'll leave it at that. Ja ne!
| Reviewed By: chaotic.calm On: February 06, 2005 05:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice, but I long for more, please update soon and continue this fic, cos I think it has the potnetial to go a long way (but then you might not feel like writing a long fic *sigh*) keep up the good work :)
| Reviewed By: Hellokitty_4_ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 19:45 CST
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...I'm confused...What happened??? Didn't Ed remember Roy and Riza and everyone else?? Now he forgot them all??? AHHHHHHH!!! *Cry* I love FMA but I don't understand what's going on. And don't forget that over in America we're only on eps.11. I think this is all at the last eps...right? BUt knowing all this...*cry* I'M CONFUSED!!!! What's happening?!?!?!? *cry* *cry*
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