| "Dancing with the Devil" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: psianogen [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 01:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
I definatly liked this. Good character development on Asuka and Shinji, and rather liked the pervert boys getting what was coming to them. Really liked the Ritsuko omake at the end.
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Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 22:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey man, great job. I love the little twist with Akagi at the end (God only knows why the good doctor is always portrayed as a S&M mistress ^^;). I like your style of writing. It's not terribly common to see a fic written in first-person this well. I would love to see more of your work. Your grammar and spelling are also excellant, with no mistakes that I could detect (great job, i'm picky on this!). While I'm not a very big fan of Ikari/Sohryu, you've done an excellant job. Overall, keep it up! Can't wait for another!
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Reviewed By: Badman08 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 19:08 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very nice departure from the usual PWP Hentai that NGE is known for, just like the porno movies of old, if you take out the sex you still got a great movie. I loved the chararization of Shinjia and Asuka along with the others in the cast. I along with the rest of Mediaminer.org would love to see more of your work. Badman08
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