| "10 Things and more you should never say in front of Hiei." Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Dark Redemption [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 03:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice ideas, the first ten were, even if a lot of them were a jab at his sister. The second 10...not so much. Maybe one pink would've been okay, but with ten it's kinda not. Plus, Hiei's worn birghter colors before. Blue, purple, red...I can't really imagine him with that much of a hatred for the color pink. Maybe this would have been funier if it were little snapshots of conversations, as opposed to just lists. Just a thought.
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Reviewed By: lub haruka On: June 27, 2005 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is soooooooo FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU'VE gotta UPDATE!!!!!!
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: Theforgottenone [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 17:06 CDT
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Thats so funny ^_^
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Reviewed By: Hieifan5 On: June 03, 2005 18:53 CDT
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i have some ideas for u to use in ur fanfic if it helps: Nunboy, miget, I saw Yukina at a bar with Kuwabara and it did not look good, and HOLY CRAP!! YUKINA GOT KIDNAPPED AGAIN!!!
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Title: ello
Reviewed By: KaramaHiei lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 10:17 CST
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brina write more........and don't fall off the cliff and forget u have wings. ^^
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Reviewed By: Jet_black [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 20:48 CST
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O_O *trys to hold it in*...*fails!* AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA...!!!! OMFG XD I can't stop laughing!!! That's hilarious!!
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Reviewed By: Hiei and a Cherry On: January 14, 2005 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!!!write more plz!
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Title: ello
Reviewed By: KaramaHiei lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more keba! pleaze? i hope you know how this is. good gob!
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Reviewed By: blackkitsuneryoku [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 07:53 CST
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-laughs- this is funny. update ASAP
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Reviewed By: Salanti [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...hemhem...ah...i believe if i said any of that i'd be dead in a heartbeat. i didn't like the first chapter but i did like the ones about pink in it.
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Title: O_o
Reviewed By: spiritfox_crazy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that if anyone said anything like that to Hiei he would really freak out!!! That was funny though. Write more please.
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Reviewed By: Ma-zoku [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 12:27 CST
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Gwad!! If I actually said that to him, I'd would probably be shot to death with pebbles. My Anya loved it especially the one if you were to say, "Hey Hiei Kuwabara said he was going to yah your sister when she came over tonight." Er something like that.... yeah.... Really funny though.
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