| "Edward Learns a Lesson" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: Pinkit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2008 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Good, for it to be your first lemon. Ed was portrayed perfectly in this fic, although Spike was a bit more talkative than usual, but it fit into the character variation you built up. And the ending -Handle it yourself space cowboy- was superbly perfect! Nice. What else do you have that I can read neh?
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Reviewed By: reflecting [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol yay! this was really good, thank you for writing it! I love SpikeXEd fics, and this is the best (heheh) I've read for a while. Short and all that ^^ anyway, really good! would you please write more? ^.~
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Title: Edward Learns a Lesson
Reviewed By: Cassial Darkblade On: December 01, 2004 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Have two words for you... YOU ROCK!!!
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Reviewed By: Kuro Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2004 03:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was real good, but it was kinda strange too. This pairing never really crossed my mind, seeing that Ed's alot younger than Spike. Its a creepy thing, the thought of them ever making love. But this story was good, well thought out, and great to the end. Besides, you kept it within character, so nothing seemed off. You should be proud! Keep up the good work Kuro,
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Reviewed By: nooneimportant On: August 09, 2004 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey...pretty good fic! Keep at it!
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Title: vash
Reviewed By: gunslingeroutlaw [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow ok that was a little bit different ed...an spike?? wow
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Reviewed By: PassiveAgressiveSpooner On: June 28, 2004 00:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Im really surprised this was a first hentai fic. I think you did a good job on it. You stayed pretty true to the characters and you style was very good. Keep writeing. Ed is Hot! ;)
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Title: T_T
Reviewed By: spoot On: June 03, 2004 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're just a flat-out bad human being. Please kill yourself.
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Reviewed By: ccam3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 14:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOOOOOOOOOO *CLAPS* WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *EVERYONE CLAPS WOOTS AND HOWES*YEAH!!!
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Reviewed By: NotAnotherHotTopicPoser On: March 16, 2004 20:14 CST
Comment/Review:
HEY IT WAS GOOD
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Reviewed By: NotAnotherHotTopicPoser On: March 16, 2004 20:14 CST
Comment/Review:
HEY IT WAS GOOD
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Title: Ed Likes It!
Reviewed By: Ed Person [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2004 05:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ed realllly liked this. Ed wish it never ended cause Ed Likes Spike Person (big cheesed up Grin) Anywho over all,I really enjoyed this opposed to Spike/Ed fanfics I've read. Spike/Faye is to damn common anymore. And Its quite boring. I must agree though. If Your going to do Spike/Ed,May as well keep her at her young ripe age. ^_^ Be bold. Forget what others think. If You truely believe in the pairing! Then I Say Raise your hands way up high and roll around on the floor happily. (Which is Why I'm Opening A Spike/Edward Fanfiction Site) You should totally work on the grammer though. Which I have no room to talk. Mines pretty bad as you can see. ^^; Write more! Hotdog Bun-Not to young, Ed
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Reviewed By: Tricky-the-Kitsune-youkia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 18:05 CST
Comment/Review:
well I thought this was very funny.
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Title: BusinessMija@aol.com
Reviewed By: Mija aka Maryann [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 05:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow..that was a totally hot lemon and a very intriquing pairing..never thought about them two together..lol..but then again Ive always seen her as a kid, she aint no more..hehe again great one shot lemon..luved it..:-)
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Reviewed By: Tink2 On: September 16, 2003 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was sooo awesome! and i love the pairing! i look all over for ExS fics but they're so hard tofind. and yeah, in the end of the series, Spike dies. it's so sad! i just saw it last night. any way, great job! and i absolutely love the ending. speaking of which, you should write a sequel. Faye/Spike perhaps? please do! but if you don't, that's ok. an way,loved the fic! ta-ta! |
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