| "Edward Learns a Lesson" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: PassiveAgressiveSpooner On: June 28, 2004 00:25 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow. Im really surprised this was a first hentai fic. I think you did a good job on it. You stayed pretty true to the characters and you style was very good. Keep writeing. Ed is Hot! ;)
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Title: T_T Reviewed By: spoot On: June 03, 2004 21:17 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10 Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review: You're just a flat-out bad human being. Please kill yourself.
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Reviewed By: ccam3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 14:33 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: WOOOOOOOOOOO *CLAPS* WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *EVERYONE CLAPS WOOTS AND HOWES*YEAH!!!
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Reviewed By: NotAnotherHotTopicPoser On: March 16, 2004 20:14 CST Comment/Review: HEY IT WAS GOOD
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Reviewed By: NotAnotherHotTopicPoser On: March 16, 2004 20:14 CST Comment/Review: HEY IT WAS GOOD
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Title: Ed Likes It! Reviewed By: Ed Person [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2004 05:17 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Ed realllly liked this. Ed wish it never ended cause Ed Likes Spike Person (big cheesed up Grin) Anywho over all,I really enjoyed this opposed to Spike/Ed fanfics I've read. Spike/Faye is to damn common anymore. And Its quite boring. I must agree though. If Your going to do Spike/Ed,May as well keep her at her young ripe age. ^_^ Be bold. Forget what others think. If You truely believe in the pairing! Then I Say Raise your hands way up high and roll around on the floor happily. (Which is Why I'm Opening A Spike/Edward Fanfiction Site) You should totally work on the grammer though. Which I have no room to talk. Mines pretty bad as you can see. ^^; Write more! Hotdog Bun-Not to young, Ed
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Reviewed By: Tricky-the-Kitsune-youkia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 18:05 CST Comment/Review: well I thought this was very funny.
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Title: BusinessMija@aol.com Reviewed By: Mija aka Maryann [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 05:52 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow..that was a totally hot lemon and a very intriquing pairing..never thought about them two together..lol..but then again Ive always seen her as a kid, she aint no more..hehe again great one shot lemon..luved it..:-)
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Reviewed By: Tink2 On: September 16, 2003 13:19 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: that was sooo awesome! and i love the pairing! i look all over for ExS fics but they're so hard tofind. and yeah, in the end of the series, Spike dies. it's so sad! i just saw it last night. any way, great job! and i absolutely love the ending. speaking of which, you should write a sequel. Faye/Spike perhaps? please do! but if you don't, that's ok. an way,loved the fic! ta-ta! |
Reviewed By: Oni Jones On: July 28, 2003 00:19 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh my God, handel it your self space cowboy was awesome. that sent the story over the edge. |
Reviewed By: vegetaslady12 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 23:07 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: WOW, that was really great, but i think you should have kept ed 13, because you shouldnt be afraid to write, Iv read worse, baleeeeeeiv me! Bur it was awesome! IM so glad it wasent a spike/faye, i hate those pairings, they are so overused, but this is one of my fav pairings ed and spike, good job! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: I admit... On: June 11, 2003 15:39 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I admit I'm perverted and that shit but the last part. ~handle it yourself cowboy~ made me bust out in laughter. Good job! |
Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 19:46 CST Comment/Review: that was fun and original and well written. I enjoyed how you ended the story best. |
Reviewed By: Feylance On: February 21, 2003 15:09 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I've always wondered what would happen between an older Ed and Spike, this was cute and lusty. Thanks for writing it! |
Reviewed By: Lain On: February 15, 2003 21:44 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I really liked that... I didn't expect to, because I'm a yaoi fan... I'm just glad this wasn't a Spike/Faye fic.
It would be awesome if you wrote a Spike/Vicious fic! There aren't enough out there. |
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