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| "New Life" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: HakkaiDuo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was just, wow. I really really like dhow you did that. i wasn't sure what was going on at first, but you had me drawn in from the first sentace, i will definelty check out more of your stuff *faves the story* keep up the good work! ^.^ ~HakkaiDuo~
| Reviewed By: Lady Katasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 21:37 CST
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This is just awesome. You wrote it so well. Very original. I definitely like your take on what happened to the gundam pilots after the war.
| Reviewed By: Yanagi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 22:49 CST
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Yeah what a pity. This is just *ahem* killer. I would never have thought of this plot.
| Reviewed By: Alangirl On: February 27, 2005 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello friend, I read your story, New LIfe, and your plot and style intrigued me so much that I read your bio. It was very interesting. I am a girl who lives in the US and has studied German for three years. My pronuciation is great but knowing what I'm saying; not so good. Well you said I a person was interested to email you, but unfortunatly I don't have an account. So next best thing. Your story rocked, so now I will have to go and read the rest of your things. I too enjoy DBZ and Gundum Wing. My fav chars are Vegeta and Heero. Both can be superior asses, but they are so handy to have around. Well, I'm always out reading, and maybe one day I'll make an account and Email you. I hope you're not freaked out. I just thought Yoou'd be nice to talk to. See ya! Alangirl
| Reviewed By: Talia Maxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 12:40 CST
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An interesting take on what happened to the boys at the end of the war. I like the originality of the idea, and the writing style was very nice, flowing smoothly. Good job! One point you may want to try improving on is catching typos. I know it's never easy to do, but the more times you read over your work, the more typos you'll catch. Also, having a beta reader is a great help, because sometimes other people can catch typos you may have missed.
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