| "An American Classic" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Dani D On: November 16, 2004 09:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well you have five now ^_^ So I guess I'll have to get my sisters to review this so you'll write the next chapter
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Reviewed By: "Anime Lady" On: July 10, 2002 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was good. I hope you get 7 review soon.....^-^
I like the suspense that you create. It keeps me on edge...
Ciao!!
"Anime Lady"
(I know my nick is weird....my friend at school gave it to me for nor reason, except that I love anime) |
Reviewed By: Anata [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2002 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very interesting. Definitely continue to make their relationship progress, but don't make it all waff.
A little angst goes a long way. I agree with foxfur about the corny "You are my everything" stuff. It's done WAY too much.
Ja~
Anata |
Reviewed By: Shi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2002 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked and would very much enjoy reading a sequel... Please don't leave us hanging. - Shi-chan |
Reviewed By: Foxfur On: December 19, 2001 22:57 CST
Comment/Review:
7??
Ok, how about if I write a reveiw 7 times. Seriously, please continue this.
What was the question? Should the boys go for one another or something mysterious happen? Definately go for one another, but not one of those sappy, "Oh Heero, I love you so much! You are my soul! My light! My strength!" "Oh Duo *kiss* *kiss* I love you also! You are my soul! My heart! My everything! *kiss* *kiss* Let's sleep together!"
I really hate those, in case you couldn't tell.
Please, continue! ^_^ |
