| "Closer" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: I cried
Reviewed By: mylovemiroku [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2006 00:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This made me remember that episode and that each time I see it, I start balling. This time I cried when they were talking about good times, which ironically hurt as much as they make you laugh. Very cute with them too! So realistic, and I like how it's more of a cuddly friendship thing. BTW, in the real episode, the Elrics aren't there. They don't find out until later about Maes.
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Reviewed By: fma fan On: July 15, 2005 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that has got to be one of the best roy/riza fics ive ever read! i really hope u write some more like this one and i would love for this to actually happen in the show!! thanks for a really great fic keep up the good wook!!;)
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Title: *sniff, sniff*
Reviewed By: NekuYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2005 08:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a beautiful bit of fluffy sadness! I haven't seen that much of FMA, but I've really enjoyed what I have. This story was a real spoiler for me and It breaks my heart to know that someone like Maes would end up dying in that series. But if something as cute and fluffy as this would come out of it, then it might be worth it. I really liked it. I've never really liked Mustang but I can see where this would fit in and I must say that I'm glad someone was able to write it this well. Many Kudos! :)
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Title: Simply Breath Taking
Reviewed By: Alas_Pendant On: February 24, 2005 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply breathtaking! You have to get this thing posted on Fanfiction.net~!! I love this stroy so much I got misty-eyed! Oi!!!! I love this fic! So well written and the perfect fluff story has been born!!!! It will be very hard to find another story that could even hold a candle to this story!
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Title: none
Reviewed By: ROY'S GIRL 91 On: February 21, 2005 12:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved your ffic. it was the best damn story i've ever read! keep writing - PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hanami_the_Tsunami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 15:02 CST
Comment/Review:
A very well-done story. The friendship between Riza and Roy seemed much closer even with the death of Hughes, and the story just brings out qualities i can't describe! I loved the story.
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Title: =O
Reviewed By: Shrewy On: January 15, 2005 02:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How can you have only one review?. *humph* I think it deserves more. Anyways, I am normally a die-hard yaoi fan *coughcough* But I loved this fic ^__^
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Reviewed By: ebon-rose On: January 13, 2005 21:54 CST
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I love your story, and thank you for the spoiler. I've been trying to make my friend tell me for a while now and she would always say no, until I saw it. It is so sad though, I really liked Maes. I almost don't want to see the episode now... almost.
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