| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect ending to the perfect story! If it wasn't for purity 4, I'd be very sad that it has come to an end. I wish I had your talent for creating such masterpieces. I can't put into words how much I cherish your stories, how much I look up to and admire you both as a writer and a person. From as little as I know about you from your A/N's, user profile, and the sueric fan fiction web site; it is clear that you are a very passionate person who sees the world a little differently then most people. If more people out there were a little more like you, I think the world would be a lot better of a place. I have been trying to type what I want to say. I can't type a whole sentence without deleting and starting over. A new personal goal for me is to strive to improve my skills to be able to write a review to one of your stories. A review that when read, will say exactly what I am trying to express. I thank you for making me want to improve myself in that way. Most of my goals are either in regards to my career or my son and my hopefully daughter to be.(I haven't had a ultrasound yet, but I will have at least 1 boy & 1 girl...even if I end with 15 children) I never set goals for just myself. When I am home on maternity leave, I am going to try to write something worth reading. I was wandering if I may e-mail you if I had something I needed sugestions or help with. I haven't tried to write anything outside of work since high school. I don't know why I'm rambling, sorry. Thank you f |
Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 23:17 CDT
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*is laughing and choking and screaming* (please note....the choking is from trying to breathe in between laughing and screaming, and the screaming is for my excitement that it's over) my favorite part in this story...."No, thanks," Toga remarked. "I feel inadequate enough.".....you just have to love that....and the way Gin proved that she could handle her-self(to bad Inuyasha missed the message) just magnifecient(i just know i spelled that wrong *sigh* sorry) i love all your stories, and i can't wait till you update purity four again....which i hope you do asap, please. well i gtg, so till then, Zirra
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Reviewed By: Crazy Fan S.S. On: May 28, 2005 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just had to stop in the middle of the chapter and comment on the Ring Pops. I laughed, really. Somehow it struck me as completely fitting for Ryomaru and Nezumi. Something that crazy (in a good way) could only come from The Great Sueric. I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed it!
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Reviewed By: nerwen faelvirin On: May 28, 2005 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finished it all and I enjoyed it very much. Nez and Ryo definitely belong together. So perfect. I think I'll go and read Purity 4 now. :)
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: kiaraecko On: May 28, 2005 22:10 CDT
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WOW this was a good chapter. i could just see Kagomes face when ryo told her the news. LOL once agin you did an awesome job!!
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Reviewed By: Kadaede NSI On: May 28, 2005 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I was laughing so hard at this Vegas Chappie that I nearly lost my soda out my nose!! Genius Work!
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 21:06 CDT
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Wow, you weren't kidding when you said you'd finish this up. They finally married. I figured they'd elope, but in Vegas, with an Elvis impersonator, and ring pops.....nice. i was laughing really hard through that. i loved this story. its kinda sad its over, but Nez and Ryo are Purity 4...good luck with that one Sueric!
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Reviewed By: MisterFlem On: May 28, 2005 20:58 CDT
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yeah. its done. thanks for writing it.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 20:53 CDT
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Awwww!! Love them!! diamond nipple stud.. they are a weird couple, but she couldn't wear a ring at work anyway... all things are good. Love it. Great story. I'm going to miss them.
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 20:50 CDT
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You are my God. 4 chapters in one evening? I just... love you. lol This story was awesome from beginning to end, as always. Beautiful, just beautiful. Great job.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 20:46 CDT
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That was such an AWESOME story!!!!! I love all the Purity sequals!!! And the first one of course....the sour apple ring pop was hilarious...I couldn't stop laughing...and WTG Gin for beating everyone the the Diamond Spear Blast...the men should have just quit after that...but then again they did! Great fic Great writer...can't wait to read more of Purity 4! Hopefully, there'll be some reason for you to make a Purity 5!!!!!
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Title: Purity 3 - Epilog
Reviewed By: Sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 20:40 CDT
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And we've come to the end of the third segment of the Purity World. I greive to see the end, cause I know I won't be able to laugh on a daily basis on just how outragious Ryo is, and smile on just how much I have grown to love Diedre/Nez. I haven't reviewed much, cause I've been too sick, but I want you to know just how much joy your talant brings into my life. With each chapter I read, I laugh, I cry, I gasp, I smile, and sometimes, I just look at the words dumbfounded. I love you Sue, may you never stop writing. Takahashi may have invented InuYasha and Kagome, but I think you have perfected their adult souls. Thanks
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Reviewed By: Chokolatte-nsi On: May 28, 2005 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, I had to comment again. 6 chappies in one day and the end of the story? you're just too good to use, Sue! That was a fantastic ending to a great story. I love their second set of "rings" :P I can't believe they ate the first ones :P And a really good lemon too! Over all, Awesome job!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Chokolatte-nsi On: May 28, 2005 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! Those were the funniest two chapters I have ever read of any fanfic! Ring pops!!! How did you come up with those? And the elvis impersonator!!! I can't stop laughing. You rock Sue!
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Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 19:57 CDT
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Ryo and Nez in Vegas? At first all I thought about was gambling and strippers, I didn't even think about wedding chapels until they got out of the elevator. What does that say about me? Not to bright. I can't wait to see how the ceromony goes. I hope it makes me cry! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
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