| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
| Pages (74): [ « ‹ 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 › » ] |
Reviewed By: me On: May 10, 2005 07:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow... you know, you got me nearly crying there... that was just... how do you manage to write feelings so accurately, so that we can really feel with the characters? Thats just... wow... you're a great author and this story, this chapter proved it again!
ed i |
Reviewed By: EAP On: May 10, 2005 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was so sweet! You wrote all the emotion so well. I really enjoyed it. Please keep writing, I cant wait to read more!
|
Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 21:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sigh* great chapter sueric, i know that may seem pathetic next to my last review but that's really all i can say. *contented sigh* please update asap, Zirra
|
Reviewed By: Suze-nsi On: May 09, 2005 21:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sniffle* *sniffle* *cough* (hey...how'd that sneak in there! stoopid pneumonia...yes, I officially have pneumonia - damn immune system!) Oh wow...I'm just...I have no words. This was just so beautiful and so *perfect* for the two of them. Despite the stumbles, not knowing how to express how they feel, they still made it. And I'm so happy!!!!! *happy sigh*
|
Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is nice that Ryo understands how much he hurt Nezumi's feelings in the past. It had to have taken a lot of guts for her to be that honest with him. Things should be a little easier for them now that they have reached an understanding. I do wonder when they will get around to having their first official date, though.
|
Reviewed By: Jesachi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good lord!!! OMG!! How can you do that? Your skill... mad skill... I was torn APART during this chapter! Nez and Ryo... realization is finally there! That is awesome! And the best part was you didn't rush into it... all baby steps!!! EXCELLANT!!! I admire your skill... wow... *still in awe* Quick question though... how old was Kagome when she had Ryo, Kich and Gin? And, something I noticed... Kich is going to get with Belle (In P4) and Gin is going to get with Cain... for some reason, in my mind, it seems like that would be wrong... not that the characters are wrong for eachother, but Gin would become like Belle's mom... and Kich would like become the Uncle to Belle, but Belle is going to get together with Kich... tell me I'm missing something here and that's not what is going to happen... like, the intermingle of family thing... I mean, Kich should be with Belle and Gin with Cain... I think most people agree... but it seems... IDK... you gotta explain this to me... I'm missing something... but, other than that, great P3 chappie... WOW!!! Can't WAIT til the next one!!! And P4 is going awesome too!!! Thanks for still posting! Don't let the flamers get you down!!! You're still the best!
|
Title: Sniffle
Reviewed By: Lisa C [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just to let you know.......I'm crying at the moment. Girl that was amazing. I don't know what else to say. There has to be something about a man crying that just breaks a womans heart. Beautiful. Thank you again for sharing your gift with all of us.
|
Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww. . . . . how adorable!!! It was so romantic!! I loved it. At least we know( but pretty much all of us knew since the beggining of the story) that they love each other. This is probably (don't take this as an insult) your best writing yet, even though I haven;t read everything by you. It's got everything a good romance needs: romance, sorrow, heartbreak, anger, comedy (and a lot of it! ^_~), and all of those good things! Way too go, Sue!!
|
Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 16:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
I knew he was going to call her in...the song in Chronicles would have been really cute at the end of the chapter...I always loved it when Inuyasha would sing that song to Kagome and lure her to sleep, but I'm also a hopeless romantic, I think.
|
Reviewed By: trinigirl524 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 16:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
whoa...that was DEEP...omg that was sweet and sad but yet also a happy moment wow...im surprised that a moment can be sad and happy too...this was a really great chapter Sue only you can make a moment feel like that i've never read anything like that seriously...just wow...omg but at least they understand each others feelings now....= )
|
Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Lokelani04 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... Wow is all I can say Sue. That chapter made me want to cry along with them...It's beautiful, very beautiful...
|
Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 13:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Today is my birthday and nothing seems to be going right so thank you for that chapter. I finished it with the first content sigh I have had all day. If I was a cat I would be purring right now. *grin* I can't believe people harass you for lemons - I prefer the emotional depth of that chapter any day.
|
Title: License Plate Number
Reviewed By: LadyB On: May 09, 2005 13:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Mr. Izayoi, While I was one of many witnesses to the horrendous sight of that emotional tracker-trailer hitting both you and the young Mrs. Izayoi I had the presence of mind to write down the commercial plate on said vehicle and it was license plate #G0C1SUE. I do hope that this information will be of some help to you. As for me I now have to go raid my husbands' hanky drawer to sop up the tears that this beautifully written, but emotionally wretching, newest installment of P3 has caused ::sniffle, sniffle::! Before I close, I'd like to make it known that in the author' defense, I loved the way she turned this chapter around towards the end and showed us the reader's the beautiful new bond that was forge d by the emotional cleansing of the tears that were shed by you and young Mrs. Izayoi. Thank you for listening. Sincerely, LadyB P.S. I love your cat. She gets right in there to offer her support when her Master and Mistress need it.
|
Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 13:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh Sue...the complexity of Nezumi and Ryo's relationship is astounding. I read each of your chapters at the edge of my seat anxiously reading the reactions that come from the realizations each of them face as they come to an understanding about their relationship, their past and the hope of a good future. I am so amazed at your skill and the emotional depth of your characters. Ryo has grown so much in this fic, and slowly but surely Nezumi's insecurities are being healed. Thank you once again for continuing to share your amazing gift. I honestly look forward to the next chapter, I can't wait to see how this night's realizations come to play in their daily lives. :) ~frankie~
|
Reviewed By: wlfhund On: May 09, 2005 13:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my, pass the kleenex. The baka pair... how beautiful. They may not talk... but, you did a great job of bringing understanding based on action. I love this chapter. I hate to say it, because I love all your writings. But, this is one of the best chappies - heart and soul shown so beautifully. Wlfhund
|
| Pages (74): [ « ‹ 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 › » ] |
