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 Reviewed By: CresentMoon21 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 27, 2005 14:42 CDT
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Oh, i want to hurt that commenter. How can anyone be so rude as to flame someone on how the character's personality is?! It's just plain stupid. If you don't like the character, why read the story? Myself personally, i love Nezumi. She taking everything really well. She's shy about her feelings, too. She reminds me a lot of myself and i love her for it. The way you write is beyond anything i could ever do. I'd like to see these flamers write a story. Most of them don't even have fics. What right do they have to flame other writers?! Ugh, drives me insane. Alright, anyway, i loved the fluff in this chapter. Very cute. And i suppose it was wise that he told her about when she could get pregnant. This chapter is probably my favorite. Good luck on your story and i'll keep reading it!(and hopefully reviewing)lol -Steph (CresentMoon21)
 Title: about insensitive reviews
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 27, 2005 13:29 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Oh sue, I am so sorry you are upset. I hope with every one annoying review that you get twenty supportive reviews that love your writing. I will be honest that I may not always like a character but I havent found a character created by you that I didnt fall in love with. I truly love your characters in all your fics, but especially in this story. Nez and Ryo seem to be acting like any couple trying to understand each other's feelings and making mistakes or learning what love is. Isn't that how most relationships are? I really am touched how your writing seems to bring these two characters to life. Thank you for writing this wonderous fic. J.
 Reviewed By: ColShaLin [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 27, 2005 12:40 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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You know, I have 3 cats myself and I laughed out loud at the beginning of this chapter. If I had a nickel for every time one of them has decided that I needed playing with while I was asleep... Enjoying the story immensely, I love the way Ryo and Nezumi are inching closer and closer to each other. Looking forward to more!
 Reviewed By: notzathros  On: April 27, 2005 10:57 CDT
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Ah. Looks like Nez is finally coming around. Good for her! Don't be stubborn Ryo. Go back to doing what you love - protecting humans and law abiding yokai. Thanks for the hopeful chapter! I needed it today!
 Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 27, 2005 10:27 CDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Hey, Sue. I agree with you, but I still hope that you will continue to write... and to block reviewers like that! Ugh, the nerve! I absolutely love the character of Nezumi. And I love reading her character development. Her conflict is what makes her Nezumi. And her resistance to (most of) Ryomaru's charms makes this one hella fun story to read! Hey, at the very least, you have a faithful reader in lil' ol' me. (Like that helps, but...) Oh, and might I say: "Go Grammar Beta!" Damn, that was funny. Sue, with people like that behind you, just know that you are loved! ~pagan_sedjou
 Reviewed By: Dar CoBien  On: April 27, 2005 10:00 CDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I just wanted to let you know, while I enjoy reading all of your stories, this one is probably my favorite. You started with, what I believe was a great original plot, and continued to make it just like all your other great stories: completely addictive to read. I have a question about Ryo, did you mention how old he is? (I really can't remember) Thank you for not giving up on posting. Everyday I look forward to reading something of yours.
 Reviewed By: Jason C  On: April 27, 2005 05:30 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Again another great chapter. I have a question. How old was Tyo when he started to hunt demons for his uncle? How old is Sheshomaru? What year is this based in? I apoligize if I have already asked you these questions I tend not to remember things. Wait I have one more question. If You could name a author with as good writing style as you and creativity who would that be?
 Title: Catching Up Again
Reviewed By: CJ Finnegan [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 27, 2005 03:53 CDT
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Been offline for a few days, so I had to play catch up again. The latest chapters have been wonderful, Sue. Please keep it coming! "whoresonned mandrake, most lacking in gall" ... Wow, I thought I was the only one who liked Shakespearean insults. :D
 Title: Nezumi
Reviewed By: naeryn-nsi  On: April 27, 2005 01:41 CDT
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I'd just like to say, I have been reading your fics for quite some time, and have loved almost all of you OC's. Nezumi is one of your most complex to date, and she is one of the reasons I am enjoying this fic so much. She is a real person, with insecurities, bravado, fears, and endearing traits. (Not that others don't have this, or that the original characters lack in any of these...) She blends so seamlessly in with the original characters and other OCs in this fic it's hard to remember that she isn't actually in the anime. Thank you for the time you take to write fanfiction and post it. Don't let the idiots get you down, especially when they can't even punctuate correctly.
 Reviewed By: Rawben..  On: April 27, 2005 01:40 CDT
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"whoresonned mandrake, most lacking in gall"...that's damn funny. ;) ok, loved the chapters! and i'm glad nez is figuring out that ryo hates his job, i dont want him suffering alone. I LOVED THE TOGA PART! damn funny! and i love seirras reaction! lol... "yeah, i got a new low light lens! i have others!" lol... anyhow, i love nez! i know others may not, but shes' one of my fav of your original characters... along w/ ryo and kich... anyhow, i'm excited for your next chapters! and dont mind the bad reviews, sometimes people are just mean. ;) your style of writing and originality are exceptional! dont take mean reviews to heart. have a nice day!!!
 Reviewed By: Twin_Star_of_Suzaku [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 27, 2005 01:38 CDT
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*growls* it's flamers like that that really pisses me off sometimes. I don't get them due to the fact that i've been trying to write original fiction and am kinda protective of my stories so I don't post them on the net... But as so many people, and the lovely Sueric said herself, "if you don't like the story for any reason, DON'T FUCKING READ IT!" come on! it's not that hard of a concept, is it?! Sueric, I'm a big fan of your writing and an always axious to read anything new you post. Please don't let the few stupid, and often time, Fluffies get you down. ^_^;
 Reviewed By: Ladyblade (NSI)  On: April 27, 2005 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Another great chapter ^_^ Just a short note really, since I personally think our betas to be the true reviewers seeing as they kindly, and bluntly, point out inconsistencies, grammer errors and general "this doesn't fit" botches. LOL ok maybe it's just me. But I was wondering if you could pass on to your grammar beta that her note left me laughing at such an extensive and well worded set down to the 'troglodytes'... ugh I'm sure i spelled that wrong... well off to see if i can get another chapter of my own out.
 Reviewed By: Red Falcon [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 26, 2005 23:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Beautiful...I don't have much more to say than that. Although I do wish that you had someone to filter your reviews, or that you didn't bother to read them. I can gather you are the type of person who wouldn't like to be cut off from the readers, but to tell you the truth, I'm terrified that after your last stories are finished you'll quit posting any new ones. I look forward to each new chapter every day. I don't like the thought that I may not have any new stories/chapters to brighten my day. Much love and a flame proof suit, -Red
 Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 26, 2005 23:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chappy as usual, I happen to love the character Nezumi, I especially like her real name seeming as it's mine, ;D, but that's besides the point. Update asap please. Oh and I just want to give you my support in your feelings about flames, pointless hurtful words every single one of them.*sigh* To bad so many people send them. Well till next time, Zirra
 Reviewed By: devildice708 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 26, 2005 23:29 CDT
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All right, I'll admit that I am not your biggest fan(hope that didn't come out the wrong way), but I truly admire your work. It's fics stories like these that attract a lot of enthusatic readers and reviewers, but on the flip side of the coin...it attracts flamers. Maybe this is my opinion but where there is an excellent story and lots of positive feedback, negativity isn't too far behind. That's just true to life, and you have to fight through it. I admire your strength to continue on posting even with the threat of flamers. From one author to another, I applaud you, and I hope you never give up doing what makes you happy--which is posting fanfiction, right? Well, that's all i have to say. Until next time...God bless...
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