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 Title: Awesome!!!
Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 29, 2005 17:25 CST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Woo hoo, now that's what I'm talking about!!!!! And I even got to see (read, technically) my Inuyasha (Yes, I know he ain't mine, but I can dream, right?)! Yay!!!!!!! I loved it!!!!!
 Title: Mean!!!
Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 29, 2005 17:11 CST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Damn it people, quit making me cry. I was practically bawling in the floor when I was reading this!!!!!!!!!!!! Oi, can't you give me a break? Juast kidding. AWESOME AWESOME!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: OROsan7706 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 29, 2005 16:47 CST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Kichiro, that was funny...hmm, wonder what kind of trouble Ryo will get in now?
 Reviewed By: IfICouldMarryInuyashaIWould(nsi)  On: March 29, 2005 15:35 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Hahahahahaha. "Dumb. Ass." I love Kich. I'm addicted to this. You'd think Ryo would remember why Nezumi was against watching the family death matches, especially when they had their conversation about Nezumi's mother so recently. Poor Nez. But anyway, I love Gin. What does she look like? Any plans to do a fan art of her? By the way, Nezumi was EXACTLY like I pictured her, so kudos on the drawing. She looks SO MUCH like Sango to me, and yet different. Any plans to bring that aspect (I remember you saying something about her being Sango's reincarnation, or am I thinking of something else? Kill me if I am. I do tend to get confused) into the story? Thanks alot! ~I.I.C.M.I.I.W. (seriously thinking of changing it from I.I.C.M.Inuyasha.I.W. to I.I.C.M.Kich.I.W. He's SO ADORABLE. I seriously laughed out loud. Looking forward to updates. Ja ne!
 Reviewed By: Nyte Angel of Darkness  On: March 29, 2005 15:09 CST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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OMG!!! I LOVE YOUR WRITING! I'VE READ ALMOST ALL YOUR STORIES! And i was so sry to hear that people dissed you stories!! LIKE HOW COULD THEY!!:@ anyways..keep writing
 Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 29, 2005 14:56 CST
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I love Sesshomaru swatting at Inuyasha's feet with the newspaper! lol Very amusing chapter. I hope Ryo is able to calm Nez down. I wonder how he'll "calm" her down... Hmmm....
 Title: Oh Boy
Reviewed By: Jaxomruth [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 29, 2005 14:44 CST
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Just when they were doing so well, Ryo has to go and be baka. He knows she hates and even knows why. He'll be luckly if she ever speaks to him again. He should at least warned how rough his family "plays". Maybe Sierra should have a talk to Nez. I think she would understand a little better than anyone else how hard this is for a human to walk into. Gin really kicked Toga's butt. Whoever she winds up with had better be tough. It seems like all the kids take after Inu-yasha. I was hoping at least one would take after Kagome. I wonder if Inu-Yasha is going to tell Ryo what Kagome realized about he and Nez's relationship.
 Reviewed By: Freefallin525 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 29, 2005 14:18 CST
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Uh-oh. Ryo's done it now. Baka. :) I love this story more and more with every chapter you post. I absolutely love your writing. :)
 Title: *snort & chuckle*
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 29, 2005 12:55 CST
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Well, that was a blunt way to introduce Nezumi to the family tradition of "play time" - Not what she expected, I'm sure. Ryo really is thickheaded, isn't he? He might almost be worse than his father. One thing about InuYasha, no matter how many times he put his foot in his mouth or crossed the line, he was always aware of Kagome, of her feelings and reactions to things. Ryo got so caught up in the 'fun' and then his lingering irritation with Kich, he was blind to how upset Nez was. Not good. Now he has to catch up and fix things...again. He really needs to start thinking first. He's lived by the seat of his pants for too long. -- Loved it!!
 Reviewed By: spookeymelichan (not loged in )  On: March 29, 2005 10:48 CST
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Wow is ryomaru a baka or what!!! Great chapter though I guess this just goes to show that Nez is REALLY gonna flip when she find out what Ryo does for his uncle. And we thought Sierra got upset over it Nez is really not going to be happy. Love the toes wggleing thing conversations between inoyasha and sesshou are always so amuseing. I am soooo happy you didn;t go through with your threat and post this else where and not tell me where it was... I think I would have cried!!! Great chappie as always Sue. Can't wait for tomarrow!
 Title: I still love that chapter
Reviewed By: LMAO15  On: March 29, 2005 10:22 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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As one of your fastest written chapters, I still am giggling even after I finished it. This had some of the best lines in in, including Toga insisting he wasn't afraid of Gin...showing just HOW much like his father he really is. Course, I don't blame him after the barb that Gin threw him, about almost getting killed by a couple of kitties. My...that was LOW. The first part of the chapter was amusing, but I wonder just what it does mean if ryo can't hear his youkai...would explain why he keeps 'talking' to himself. His youkai is trying to thwap him in the head. I am sure that sooner or later he will listen to it instead of arguing with it. Did you know you are the only author where reading the reviews is almost as amusing as the chapter? They make me laugh....LOL
 Title: Chapter 18
Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 29, 2005 10:09 CST
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Ah, so InuYasha didn't have to ask Ryo, he had to ask Sesshoumaru ... no wonder Kagome "owed" him!!! I still don't understand why someone in the younger generation wouldn't notice how upset Nez was by the fighting and explain things to her (especially since the whole family can tell Ryo hasn't told her ANYTHING). As for poor Ryo ... one baby step forward, two GIANT steps backward, huh? This should be good for at least two or three angst-ridden chapters before poor Nez even begins to see the light - or poor Ryo even begins to get within 10 feet of her! You have no idea how much I look forward to this each day ... thanks!!! :-D
 Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in  On: March 29, 2005 10:06 CST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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WOW. you know, out of all of the fics that you have written with the abundant amount of chappies, this chapter is by far my favorite. i laughed from the opening line to the end. that was just halarious!!! i'm still trying to decide what tickled me more: Sesshoumaru swatting at InuYasha with a rolled up newspaper, Nez's reation to the two older bakas fighting, Sesshoumaru's reaction to Toga getting his ass handed to him by Gin...or Kagura's interfearence. that was PRICELESS. ...::snicker:: romper room...that is GREAT!!!! LMAO. ohh....you managed to do it agian, anoter great chappy i mean. excellent job!!! (btw- i know you left anime spiral but i feel obligated to tell you that you're up for best overall fic on metamorphosis.). :-) GREAT job and keep it up! this chapy was priceless
 Reviewed By: fruitcake  On: March 29, 2005 09:33 CST
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lol.
 Reviewed By: cj flutterbye  On: March 29, 2005 09:29 CST
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Family of Youkai fight as entertainment... Nez is going to have issues...
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