| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: OROsan7706 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 00:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now ain't that a bitch; I feel so sorry for Nez.
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Title: heyoooo
Reviewed By: Mizbum2u On: April 02, 2005 00:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey you! when you said only half of him was awake does that mean that his youkai blood was awake? wait... that came out wrong... what i meant was that ryo wasn't actually awake but his youkai blood was kinda couching him with her? i dunno hard to explain... great chapter by the way... nezumi is finally started to get some stuff down-i hope! well if he was a sleep and said her name what does that mean? heh heh... 10's all the way baby! update soon! and have a good weekend! -hien
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Reviewed By: Jaxomruth [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 00:13 CST
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Well, sooner or later Ryo is going to have to tell Nez what he does for a living, even if he does quit. She is going to be upset but I think she would more upset if he kepts disappearing in the middle of the night.
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Title: Loving every chapter
Reviewed By: thoughts On: April 01, 2005 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh how wonderful. Ryo is just as you would imagine Inuyasha's son to be like. I think you got it right when you had Shippou explain to him that he inherited his father's "baka" gene. :) I love how you have made him like Inuyasha but not so harsh due to his family's influence. It is always a good sign when I feel like taking one of the characters aside and shaking some sense in to them. Hmm... an interesting form of sleeping there. Poor Ryo. Let him remember some of the good stuff. I like the potential conflicts that you are setting up. I'm hoping that you will continue to surprize me with your solutions. I'd love to see a scene with Inuyasha explaining to Nezumi that Ryo inherited his baka gene or lack of tact/finesse from him. I'm looking forward to seeing how you rescue Ryo from his lovable but truly hopeless self.
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Reviewed By: .Akihana. On: April 01, 2005 22:40 CST
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Nothing like a good fluffy chapter in the evening. I'm sorry i have nothing better to say. What happened to the Purity one shot?
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Reviewed By: spookeymelichan (not loged in ) On: April 01, 2005 20:56 CST
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GROWL!!!!!!!! LOL at least I didn't read this one at work I love teh fluffyness... ::sigh:: I can die happy today much wanted fluffyness. Heh is it so wrong that I keep reading the last part multiple times??? I love P3 great stuff you made my day! Thank you so much for the update you rock!
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Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 20:49 CST
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Wow....yes...wow. LOVE that chapter. Coulda been called...'The Baka gets a Clue" He finally realizes he's putting HER in danger by not marking her and did I see a hint of admitting that he refuses to let her go. Well apparently his unconcious/youkai knows JUST what it wants....LMAO....it keeps getting all the action. LOL...GO YOUKAI!!!
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Title: Purity 3:Forever
Reviewed By: demonqueen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find this story humourous, serious,sad,romantic. Like a good story with a mix, it leaves one wondering what is going to happen next. You hope that Ryo and Nez come to an understanding and admit their feelings for one another. Only then will they be truly happy.
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Reviewed By: gih... On: April 01, 2005 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa, i love this story more and more. this is my fav out of all 4 purity stories... also, i think you can rate this a R instead of a NC17... i've read both, and nc17 has more... citrus.
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Title: The Angst...oh Lord the Angst!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 09:34 CST
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Poor Nez, (I'm all too fond of that phrase) she is hurting so bad. I always have to grab the tissues when reading P3, I kid you not. Ryo is going to have to tell her what he does because, as much as she hates blood, the thought that he might be with another woman is worse. Be as gradual with the telling as you want, Ryo, that's good advice, but make a start...and soon. -- God I love this story!!
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within (NLI) On: April 01, 2005 08:40 CST
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Poor, poor Ryo. Such a dumbass. So i have a question about the whole inner youkai claiming Nez thingy: Why didn't Ryo's inner youkai (or whatever you call it) protest him 'dating' other women? Shouldn't it have only wanted Nezuni? Or was Ryo 'dating' other women just to get Nezumi out of his mind? Great Chapter!
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Reviewed By: maniac mansion On: April 01, 2005 08:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey! Great chapter (as always) Poor Nez, doesn't know what she wants...doesn't she? No chap until monday?! Sniiiiiiiif!!! Purity 4 with Gin... There wi'll be Purity 5 with Kichiro?
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Reviewed By: lakskslsks On: April 01, 2005 02:10 CST
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another great chapter! you're doing so well!
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Title: Trouble in Paradise
Reviewed By: Jaxomruth [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 23:53 CST
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Well, they are going to have an interesting talk when he gets home. I kind of disappointed that you will not be posting a chapter tomorrow but I am excited to see your one-shot.
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Reviewed By: wlfhund On: March 31, 2005 21:15 CST
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Yeah! Sess/Yasha AND Toga/Gin battling! That was so fabulous! Oh, why oh why... I do so get the feeling that Ryo is getting ready to get blindsided. Poor man, i am not sure he even sees the truck barreling down on him??? I love this story sue! A ONE shot??? Can't wait for that! Gotta love it! BEAUTIFUL! Wlfhund
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