| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: April 14, 2005 08:31 CDT
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Oh geez! What a cliffie! Aargh. That's terrible. They put his face on the TV before even proving anything. Poor Ryo and his family. Even if the police do eventually realize they've got the wrong man, that taint will follow him forever. Ack. I'm beside myself. He's the good guy, for crying out loud. Groan! Thanks for another great chapter. Now my head's all messed up though. Sigh.
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Reviewed By: EAP On: April 14, 2005 02:19 CDT
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Ooohh man...How is Ryo going to get out of this one. If they do a DNA test on him will it show enomilies or something because he's hanyou? Oh no! He's single-handedly revealed the youki world! Stupid, stupid. Perhaps I'm getting carried away, no? Excellent chapter, Kagome talking to Nez was realy sweet. And dont worry about the perverts, some people just can't appriciate beautiful writing *sigh*. Sorry for them. They're missing out, really. You're a great writer, I so enjoy reading your stories. Please keep updating!
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Title: Baka
Reviewed By: Wlfhund On: April 13, 2005 22:42 CDT
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Oh my, Ryo's soft spot... got him in trouble? Hard for any Hanyou to walk away from an injured human... DAMN that is gonna mess up Nez. Naughty, naughty Sue... I worry that Ryo's never gonna get it right with Nez. Now she's figured out he's an exterminator AND his momma just left after telling Nez that her "baby boy" ain't so bad... Then she's gotta determine if he's a rapist? You toture these poor characters... Oh my Sue... You're breaking my heart, I am really fond of the Baka Ryo... Wlfhund
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Reviewed By: OROsan7706 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 21:05 CDT
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Sue...if it makes you feel any better, I don't really read the lemons because I feel that it isn't necessary for you to allow those hentai's their 'reward'. Now, I have to admit, I did read most of the lemons and I'm grateful that you actually had them based on LOVE instead of LUST! But your stories are just as wonderful as they are now without the lemons, and those who can't see that, they don't deserve to read your stories!
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Reviewed By: Cynbad146 On: April 13, 2005 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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(Chants with hip hop music)GO SUE! GO SUE! GO SUE! Glad to hear you tell the immature, rude asses, to buzz off! Story is still great! I love it! Thank You, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: anon..... On: April 13, 2005 20:14 CDT
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very good!
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Reviewed By: phoenixburns [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pah! Who needs a lemon? I don't. You are an excellent writer who can write whatever the hell you want. Piss on everyone else. I like your story just the way it is. You write quality not trash. So I for one love your writing. Keep up what your doing it works. (not that you need my opinion or permission)
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Title: the best
Reviewed By: thegoddess On: April 13, 2005 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I definitely think you're currently the best inu fanfic writer. If people want to beg for mindless sex tell them to go watch some porn. But all that aside I truely would like to extend my deepest gratitude for your work. It makes the hours spent looking for a readable fic worthwhile. Please for the love of kami, keep writing and don't let those @$$*%^holes tell you how your story should go.
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Title: Purity
Reviewed By: Fluff-maru-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOl nice Chapter. I love all the Purity Series. Your funny When it comes to lemons. I love the story so far and all your other fics and lemons aren't really that important or is it lol anyway keep up the good work. Ryo gets himself into alot of trouble. I hope Nez doesnt kill him for being on the tely for the misunderstanding rape thingy. Don't make it to tragic lol. KK UpDate Soon KAY! Signed Fluff-maru-Sama FmS
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Reviewed By: Suze-nsi On: April 13, 2005 19:11 CDT
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Nice chappie title. ;) Oh, Ryo, Ryo, Ryo...what have you gotten yourself into now? I have to imagine that Sesshoumaru has some good contacts to help deal with this situation, but having Ryo's face plastered all over the news can't be a good thing. As for the lemon-hounds...WTF??? I don't get that at all. I love me my citrus, but only if there's a point. If that's all they're looking for, there's loads of other places to get it. Sheesh.
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged on On: April 13, 2005 18:46 CDT
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great additions to the story. wow...i guess it is back to Sesshoumaru to the rescue, ne? geez has Ryo put himself up shits creak on that one!! eep? and with the disappearing bodies, this is not going to be easy. and jails in japan...oh no. LOL, great additions to the story, i can't wait to see where this goes!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, I agree with you. I am a lemonhead, but I don't usually beg for them. I never beg for them in this story because the story is way better than the lemons because it HAS emotion, it HAS a plot. I don't mean to insult other writers, but. . . . You get my point, right? Good--Great chapter as always!! See ya tommorow!
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Title: YATTA!
Reviewed By: OROsan7706 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well said Sueric!!!!! Why would someone only read your stories for lemons; you don't really have that many of them in there, with the exception of Metamorphosis. I can't understand why people would beg you for them when your stories aren't even about them. People these days...anyway, now Ryomaru is in prison, I hope Nezumi will believe that he is innocent. Oh, this isn't going to be good, not good at all...I wonder what Inuyasha's going to do when he finds out...or worse...Kagome! Yikes!!!
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Reviewed By: btrains126 On: April 13, 2005 17:21 CDT
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Ok. Sesshomaru let him get arrested? Shouldn't the Inu no Taisho be keeping things like that from the news? Slightly confused at what Nezumi's thoughts are right now - her sentences aren't complete - I'm sure that you'll explain next chapter (Although I know already but still - its nice to see it in writing). I always thought that PWP meant Plot? What Plot? but to each his/her own. Woohoo! You tell those hentais! You would think that by now they would have gotten the message - you've only written a gazillion stories - each saying "Lemons if and when necessary only" Geez, can't they take a hint?
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Title: Chapter 26
Reviewed By: WiccanMethuselah [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 16:55 CDT
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Oh, for crying out loud!!!! Why on earth do people keep doing that and pissing off the author???? What on earth is so necessary about LEMONS that they have to be inserted every three chapters in every fic?? Aaarrrgghhh ... I'm more frustrated about that author's note than I am about the fact that my hard drive crashed and I lost five years of my LIFE! I'm just glad that you are still writing ... period ... lemon or NO lemon! I'm also VERY GLAD to see that FINALLY one of the more wise, intuitive, caring family members decided to let Nez in on PART of what's going on with Ryo. Sorry, but it was a little overdue, in my book ... although, I'm sure it all fits in with your overall EVOL plans to torture the poor guy some more and keep your readers guessing as well, right? You still do not disappoint ... and I've missed being able to review regularly ... but I'm managed to steal computer time here and there to make sure I kept up with the story anyway! ;-D
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