| "The Answer's Still Water" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Arashii On: February 05, 2005 06:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You mixed some words and grammar here and there, but overall, this is a very enjoyable fic.
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Reviewed By: Asteria [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 12:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
You may want to have someone proofread this. I noticed several places where you meant one thing but used the wrong word (Clorophyll instead of chloroform, for example). Overall it was a very good story except for the misused words.
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