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| "The Call of the Magi" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] | Title: Our Story
Reviewed By: findecthelion11 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 13:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everyone, this story is a medieval based story. It is mostly based off the Dragonlance series, and has our personal Characters and plots. Keep checkin in....CH. 2 is complete!!!
| Reviewed By: Disavian On: February 07, 2005 20:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The first chapter is excellent, although I find the second lacking. The dialouge and activity in the second chapter are not clear at all, and after he is rescued he appears to be too dumb to realize that his master might have wished him to die. Overall, it's great, and I like the character :)
| Reviewed By: rachel s. On: February 07, 2005 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was well written, but could be better revised. Unfortunately I am not really into these kind of stories, but I happened to enjoy this. The detail provides a well defined image of what's going on, which is good for those who have no imagination. he,he,he. my favorite thing from this story has to be from chapter one when it's written "lust for death". Gosh that's great...well, good luck on the chapters soon to come!!!
| Reviewed By: silly head On: January 21, 2005 10:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you guys. This story is awsome. I love it, and I wan't to read more. I thaught my story was a good one, guess I was wrong. You'r story *rocks* Your spelling isn't bad, you should read my story if you want to see bad spelling. *_* You guys used a good choice of words, making the story sweat. Miss ya ~~~Sarah~~~
| Title: THX EVERYBODY!!
Reviewed By: Justin and John On: January 19, 2005 11:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright. This story i have to say is going to be really cool. We, jusitn and i, are officially done with the first chapter. Everyone who has or is reading this story....keep checking in, we update almost everyday.
| Title: OH EEM GEE!! lol
Reviewed By: Livvy (again, lol) On: January 18, 2005 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, sorry, but I just read the reviews others have written, and I really wish the Dr. wouldn't have been so rude to you. I mean, for goodness sakes, we're here to give encouragement, not to make you feel bad about yourself, especially when it's a good story. Don't listen to the Dr. As you can see from the other reviews, you did a fine job. ^__^ Maybe this story just wasn't that particular person's cup of tea. ::shrug::
| Title: !!
Reviewed By: Livvy On: January 18, 2005 20:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay, sorry, but I just read the reviews others have written, and I really wish the Dr. wouldn't have been so rude to you. I mean, for goodness sakes, we're here to give encouragement, not to make you feel bad about yourself, especially when it's a good story. Don't listen to the Dr., you did a fine job and as you can see from the other reviews, you did a fine job. ^__^
| Title: WOW!!!!
Reviewed By: Livvy On: January 18, 2005 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh, you did an AMAZING job!!! I love this!!! So imaginitive, the creativity, the discriptions!! ^______________^ Very good job, your teacher better give you an A!! Wow, this would make a really cool manga. ^__^ After I practice some more with my drawing, would you maybe permit me to do some art for this? (By the way, if you're wondering who I am, I'm a friend of your sisters. ^__^ ) Once again, great job!!
| Title: Not bad ;)
Reviewed By: RayJayiscrazy (nsn)* (Rachael) On: January 17, 2005 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad you guys! Very original ^.^ Update soon!
| Title: From Your Senior...(though I don't know what that means :) ).
Reviewed By: Bethany On: January 17, 2005 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although this style of story isn't necessarily my cup of tea, I did enjoy it. Elf! ::does happy dance::. I pouted a little when he yelled at the Elf. (Ever since watching "Lord of the Rings" I've had a thing for Elves). I think it is progressing nicely. As for ideas...that I can not help with. I don't write these types of stories; I just occasionally read them. I can't wait to find out what happens.
| Title: Good story
Reviewed By: Skaska On: January 17, 2005 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome! I've encountered far slower beginnings that are actually in print. Discription, especially when Magan is coughing in the hall, is excellent. It uses complex words w/o sounding out of place and wordy. I assume you're continuing the novel, but I think where you've stopped is a good ending for a ch. 1
| Reviewed By: theMaven (not logged in) On: January 17, 2005 07:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It seems to be off to a good start. It's descriptive without being overwhelming, and you've successfully set the stage for future events. I haven't really read a work of fantasy fiction in over a decade, but your fic seems to fit in well with other pieces of this genre. Watch for spelling errors, though ^ ^ Happy writing to both of you!
| Reviewed By: C la On: January 16, 2005 21:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an uplifting and diverting story, with wonderfully suggestive, and inspiring thoughts of bravery.
| Reviewed By: SaSelah On: January 16, 2005 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an uplifting and diverting story, with wonderfully suggestive, and inspiring thoughts of bravery.
| Reviewed By: jenna joy On: January 16, 2005 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.. creative. sounds like you guys are on you're way to a really good story. keep it up, let me know if you write more!!
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