| "the split" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: .... .... .... what?!
Reviewed By: LubHAruka On: April 08, 2005 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice sotry exept.....wat is that girl talking about....agian...? well, that was really funny is some wierd way to me...so update soon!
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Reviewed By: Hi-chankurara* On: April 03, 2005 14:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
To lazy to log in, good fic though you should continue on with it more and more... lot more ne? Update soon if you have time ja ne.
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Reviewed By: hi-chankurara [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 13:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm sorry but I don't know why I can log in my page. I like your story short, but nice. Go easy on the chocolate and Mountain Dew next time, your story is fine but add alot would be great. Updated your next chaper soon K? Updated please.
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