| "What Do You Do?" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: FUN FUN FUN!!!!
Reviewed By: lub haruka On: July 10, 2005 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!this was unbelievably fun to read!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE! sry about your family problems....but the next chapter should be really funny like you said.....ummmmm....lets see...i'll give you choices?...(for dares)1)yukiko dares one of the boys to have a sweet-tooth contest(it's a sugar/sweets/icecream eating contest)agianst her and who ever finishes first gets to shave off kuwabara's hair. (this should be hiei's work and later they both fish at the same time and get sugar high and gets shavers then run after the screaming kuwabaka i mean bara) 2)fate tells yukiko to dare kurama to try some juice fate makes with yukiko all by themselfs(and lets say they don't know how to make juice unless kin is with them) 3)kohaku dares anyone to call koenma and scare him to death and annoy him to death about 60+ times. (for truth) 1) the girls ask hiei if he has a sibling and yukiko threatens him that she has a lie detectore(but she holds up a microwave...i did that before...WAT?!) 2) any one of the boys ask kin if she has ever given anyone of the girl the "thousand years of pain"(it's when you shove your fingers up someone's butt..i did that to...some..one..WAT?!) this is all i can get out from mai head right now...and keep up the good work! I LIKE INSANE PPLE THEY'RE JUST INSANE LIKE ME WHEN IGET HYPER!!!!!! GOOOOO INSAME PPLES!!!
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Reviewed By: hi-chankurara [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, nice work. Hope to talk to you sometime. Updated your next story soon K? Talk to you later.
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