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| "Of Fire and Ice" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] | Title: The Overdue Brother
Reviewed By: freelova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 15:18 CDT
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Name:Kushino Kibiki Age:19 1/2 Nickname:Kush and sometimes Mr.Kush. Gender:Male. Hair color:brown with silver streaks, braided. Eye color:a gold-silver white. Skin:pale from being starved. Build:skinny, but has muscles.Big ones. Height:5'34''. Weight:109 pounds. Village:Mist Village. Rank:An S-class Jounin who went missing...How many years ago? Special Techiques:Can talk to bats, snakes and basically every animal. Preferred style in clothing:Loose baggy clothes to stop people from looking at his scars.Many of them permanant. Personality:Low-key, smart. History:He was caught by Orichimaru while on a solo ABNU mission. Forcefully locked up and kept out of sight, slowly Kushino's will began to disappear. He allowed himself to be beaten because he felt that he had no right to live.He could not free himself til one of Orichimaru's prisoners whispered in his ear about his lost sister. The one who suffered from the Curse Mark...And he began his pursuit of finding and trying to help his sister. The one they call Kyla, alias, Kyli. Friends:He had many friends before he was caught.Now dead. Dislikes:Orichimaru, Kabuto and anything involving the Sannin and his operation. Crush:Kiba
| Title: WHOOPS
Reviewed By: freelova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 12:23 CDT
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Kyla's 17 1/2 by the way!!
| Title: Imori's Associate
Reviewed By: freelova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 12:20 CDT
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Name:Kyla Kibiki Nickname:Kyli(pronouced like Kylee) Gender:Female Hair color:brown with silver streaks(natural). Eye color:a type of gold-silver. Skin:pale, but healthy. Build:nice chest which attracts unwanted suitors. Height:5'6''. Weight:100 punds exactly(she diets too much). Village:Mist Village. Rank:An S-classed Jounin like Imori.A missing nin. Weapons:Carries around a big katana laced in viper poision. Her nail polish has anoconda poision too. Special Techniques:Talks to snakes and makes them do her bidding.Also uses her "Beauty Flourish" jutsu to lower her opponent's(preferably men)guard and forces them to die by either her pet snakes or her nails. Preferred style of clothing:Usually black dresses that come above the knee and tempt men to their death. Personality:Ever hear of poision mixed with honey? That's her. The moment she lulls you into the thought that you killed her or won, she strikes. And HARD. History:Kyla woke up one day.Her memories were gone, her parents dead. She had killed them.She wandered aimlessly, having to steal to survive. She was found by Orichimaru when he was wreaking havoc somewhere.He saw her talent before she did and he made Kabuto help him bring it out.She interested him, the moment she dropped her guard though he gave her the "Curse Mark", hoping she'd be a loyal servant.He was wrong.She blew up his hiding place at the time and made a run for it.She was found half dead by Imori who was on a mission and he took her to a hospital and watched over her.Soon after she got, she begged him to let her join. He only said yes because he saw her as a valued asset and he had a grudge against Orichimaru like she had. Friends:Imori. Although he doesn't consider her a friend, she trusts him and thinks of him like a brother. The only person she couldn't and wouldn't harm. Dislikes:Orichimaru. More like hates him. She wants to rip his head off!! Crush:Kisame(yeah the one who is Itachi's partner).
| Title: Rika's Brother
Reviewed By: freelova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 11:37 CDT
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Name:Imorion Ichira. Nickname:Mori or Imori Age:18 Gender:Male Hair color:a deep green, wears a ponytail alot Eye color:sea green with a little gray.Turns yellow when angry. Skin:dark. sun tanned. Build:light build, not too muscular. Height:6'23'' Weight:132-135 pounds Village:Rain.Declared a missing nin and wanted dead. Rank:An S-class Jounin. Weapons:most of them are hidden, but there's a range of kunais, shuriken, wind shuriken,and a 2 poles like Rika filled of "water". Special Techniques:the Ichira eyes rival that of the Uchihas, but the most favorite attack of his is:"Bird's Eye View", a type of taijutsu and ninjutsu. He uses taijutsu to kick his opponent atleast 30 ft. in the air and as they come down he strikes them harshly with high and low kicks, many times in the rib cage and stomach.This takes little chakra but alot of time for the opponent to strike back. Preferred style of clothing:Anything he sees other people wear alot so he doesn't stand out. Personality:Pretty much go with the flow type of guy.But when he breaks out in a sweat you'd better get the hell away because he'll go mental on your ass even if you're a foe or friend. History:At the young age of 11, Imorion slaughtered his entire Clan. Why? Because he heard his mother and father saying they would kill him and little Rika for power. So they could remain in charge.The poor kid already had emotional issues, so when he heard that...He snapped.Went on a killing spree, he only stopped because he heard Rika's frightened screams. Unable to deal with his issues he decided he had to get his little brother far away from him. Even if it meant trying to kill him a few times. Friends:None. He only has an associate named Kyla. Dislikes:Orchimaru. Crush:Sasuke
| Reviewed By: freelova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 11:07 CDT
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forgot to mention that Rika is 14. Hehe, bye
| Title: my character
Reviewed By: freelova [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok. HI! this is what I'd like IF you use my character Name:Rikano Ichira Nickname:Rika Gender:Male Hair color:a deep green Eye color:sea green with a little gray. Turns yellow when he gets mad. skin:dark. sun-tanned. build:muscled. very muscled. height:6 feet even weight:134 pounds village:Origionally he came from the Village of Rain, but after his clan was brutally killed he left, or rather ran away, his brother is trying to hunt and kill him. rank:respectivley Chuunin weapons:(seen to the eye)two heavy poles on his back full of "water" as he insistently says, shuriken.(unseen to the eyes)a bow hidden in his cloak that he constantly wears. Special techniques:like the Sharingan. When his eyes turn yellow he "sees" into a person's mind and "hears" what they think or say. Useful while in battle, better to get revenge on friends. preferred style of clothing:black leggings and black top. Usually he designs them with a dragon on the back. Or just words. Personality:the type that don't like to be crossed. If you wrong him once he cuts you hand so you can't reach him.(not literally!). History:Born in the Ichira Clan is almost like being born into th Uchiha Clan. You are raised to meet high standards and first impressions mean everything. When he was 7, his brother killed everyone...Except him.Some say the mental abuse was too much on the 11 year old and he went mad. Rika knows better.Which is why he watches his back.Always looking over his shoulder. friends:Sakura, Naruto, Kiba, and Hinata Dislikes:his brother,Neji, and Ino Crush:Itachi! He loves Itachi with a passion, but Sasuke crossed his mind a couple times.
| Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 07:29 CDT
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Name: Julia mirashi Nickname (If your character has one): N/A Gender: Female Age: 16 Hair colour/style: tan and its held back with a red head band. Eye colour: silver Skin: pale Build: small and stringy Height: 5'3" Weight: 95 LBS Village: the village of sound because she works for orochimaru. Rank: Ninja - chunin Weapons: none Special techniques: her gekkei kenkai alows her to change any part of her body into a metal and shape it into anything from a blade to a malet and she can fire off her metal in things like senbon or kunai. Preferred style of clothing: she wears a grey sleveless shirt with the japanesse symbol for forge on her back. she has on white pants that go down to her ankles with cuts on the knees and she has black sandals. Personality: out of battle she is colected, nice, and curtious, but in battle she is crule, calculative, and relentless. History: her orgiginal village was destroyed in a battle between akatsuki and one of the jinjurichi when she was four. orochimaru came to the desroyed village after he heard of a family with a powerful gekkei kenkai. he found their house only to find the adults dead, but he came accross julia. he took her to the sound village telling her that he was here to help. there she was trained in her blood line limit and other ninja things and became a sound shinobi. Friends or people he/she gets along with: any sound ninja Dislikes/disliked by: konoha crush/lover (If they have one): crush on kabuto
| Title: Opps!
Reviewed By: Aoi Koori Luna On: May 17, 2005 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So sorry, I forgot to mention, that she can only work on such things as Metal/Wood/Hard Plastic, forget the grass, it was an example, and since I put Kakashi-san for my Crush/Lover part, then not same gender please. Thank you! ^.^
| Title: Woohoo! Another Self-Insert Ficlet!
Reviewed By: Aoi Koori Luna On: May 17, 2005 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Aoi Koori Luna Nickname: Aoi Gender: Female Age: 15 Hair color/style: Shaggy hair cut of Chocolate Brown Hair Eye color: Emerald/Gold Eyes Skin: pale Build: Slight Muscle, lean. Height: 6 ft. Weight: 120 pounds Village: Ice Village. Rank: Ninja - Anbu, if you could call that a Rank, not sure. If not, then Gennin Weapons: Shuriken, Kunai, and a 6ft. Long sword, tied to her back. Special techniques: Can take anything and transform it into something else, like, she could take a blade of grass, and turn it into a Kunai. Preferred style of clothing: Black Pants Dark Blue/Black T-shirt, White Gloves always, White Ninja shoes. Personality: BloodThirsty in Battle, Friendly, Calm and kind with Friends and Family, Stoic to strangers. History: The only one of her kind left, she is extremely smart and can outwit anyone. When she was little, her family moved from the Ice country. While in the middle of this grand move, her family was attacked and killed. She was sleeping when it happened, and being such a heavy sleeper, she didn't wake up, but when she did, Aoi saw her family dead, and promised a Sadistic revenge against the ones that killed her family. Friends or people she gets along with: Naruto, Shikamaru, Kakakshi, Iruka, Hinata, Temari, Gaara, Kiba, Neji, Sakura, Sasuke, and Kankuro Dislikes/disliked by: Anybody not stated above. Crush/lover: Hatake Kakashi-san.
| Title: what's takin' so long?
Reviewed By: Tim Seltzer On: February 27, 2005 14:16 CST
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It's been a month since your last update. What, you need help? It's taken more than a month already. So what's happening?
| Reviewed By: Tim Seltzer On: February 05, 2005 08:03 CST
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I would prefer you didn't use your character. A little too powerful on all sides. In fact any characters with overwhelming abilities and who could probably hold their own with Naruto at full strength are absolute shit. It not only would make the story kind of boring, but would also make it seem like only ego-maniac-self-inserts are in there. Now, when will you post that next chapter?
| Reviewed By: Lonely_Destiny (not logged in again ^^;;) On: January 29, 2005 16:14 CST
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i would rather not have Jukusei with same gender relationships, but i don't mind on Kuro-kun's and rave's part, it's your decision
| Reviewed By: Tim Seltzer On: January 29, 2005 08:51 CST
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As I said, those two will only get comprimising/embarrassing situations. Any actual relationship with either gender is not allowed. You can have quite a few jokes with them. The only comprimising situation I object to is either of them getting on a bed with someone after drinking. By the way, who are you using? If you use one of mine you need the other. Get some action going on though laddie.
| Title: Dont be discouraged
Reviewed By: Magus Black [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 08:12 CST
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Sorry if I made you feel bad. Anyone that has gotten a character from me could tell you that I take it seriously and with a creative flare. But enough of my seemly-meaningless rambling, good luck. And I believe that I gave you all your answers, hopefully, and any questions you have for me just drop me a line.
| Title: Question:
Reviewed By: Magus Black [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 23:04 CST
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Lo, I have a few smal things to add (irronically I had missed them): For one: he wears simple tan pants like any other the villagers/peasants. (I had realized that a kimono is not alway...covering. Two: Since I have gotten no reply I'll ask now. Did you get it? I had emailed it to the address that you had placed but am unsure if you had actually gotten it. Well good luck, and if you use him...dont reveal 'everything' about him. (laughs at other reviewers) (cough) err Bye!
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