Reviewed By: Alan_2099 On: March 13, 2005 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far it looks to be an intresting read. From what you're wrote, Dooms seems to still be in character, but it also seems like you take every oppontunity you have to call him by name. Saying He or him everyonce in a while wouldn't hurt.
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