| "A series of unfortunate 'sexual' events" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: AmaneBakura [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 18:55 CDT
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PLEAS OH PLEAS DO RYOU AND BAKURA!!! HAVE MALIK BE EVESDROPING!! PLEAS!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: alonegirl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 09:28 CST
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lololololololololol *died laughing* Ghost: Jesus christ that was hilarious I figured out the pencil one but the spider just had me lmaoing plz update soon ;~; ^___^
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Reviewed By: Mai Valkov On: March 20, 2005 09:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Erm, hi sis. You're grammmar and spelling has gotten better, but only because I had to flick through quickly and corrected bits of it. I thought I told you to do the rest!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That took your score down. But overall, it's a very good fic. Keep those rude and sick minded chappys coming!!!!!! Heh, 'coming'. Luv from your sis, X~Mai Valkov~X
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Reviewed By: Ryoku! On: March 19, 2005 12:21 CST
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-is too busy laughing so her yami speaks- Jas: She found this funny and so did I. Great job update ASAP please. how DARE you make me say please Hikari. Me: -is too busy rolling on the ground laughing-
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Reviewed By: x_xWICKEDx_x On: March 18, 2005 20:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome!please update and please pair Bakura and Seto! :)
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Reviewed By: Tjay(too lazy to sign in) On: March 18, 2005 19:41 CST
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BAKURA/RYOU That would be funny... have like Malik or Marik eavedroping... Bakura... and Ryou... *laughs at idea of them talking about something sexual*
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Reviewed By: Yamifanner [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 16:45 CST
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*ROFLMAO* Do Tristan(Honda)/Duke(Otogi) next. Have Serenity eavesdrop too. Update.
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Reviewed By: Ryous_fav_gurl On: March 17, 2005 11:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmfao oh Ra that was so helarious you really need to up date and hurry. XD To tell you the truth i figured it was some kind of animal or bug.
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Reviewed By: yami_karii On: February 03, 2005 02:07 CST
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lol funneh^^
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Reviewed By: Lily Fairy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 15:17 CST
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O_O Grandpa is NASTY, but to tell u the truth, i was thinking what he was thinking too...^_^'
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