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| "Hourglasses" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Reviewed By: fain sadi On: January 20, 2008 00:05 CST
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Oh dear! I'm hooked. Please tell me you have not abandoned this and that it will be updated soon.
| Title: Plz finish!
Reviewed By: Moonliel On: January 04, 2008 00:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was simply amazing and captivating. I was so disappointed when i realized it only stopped on chapter 7 and the link for the next chapter didnt exist! - please, if you have the time, finish this fic. This is one of the best PoT Tezu/Ryo fics I've ever read. The slow romance is cute and endearing, and the personalities and interactions of the characters are amazing and very well written. Again, please continue this fic-- or at least let me know whether it's going to be continued or not at: v4queen007@aol.com - thanks!
| Reviewed By: theaprilbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 01:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Aack, I looked for the next chapter link but it wasn't there! Haha. The "TBC" is very taunting. Are you planning on continuing this? It's very good.
| Title: Sweet Tez/Ryo pairing
Reviewed By: Genbo On: September 05, 2006 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I believe your an amazing writer! Please Continue! Aww... Tez/Ryo sweet pairing
| Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 13:14 CDT
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great fic. does Tezuka choose Ryoma before Ryoma leaves? what happens for hte rest of the ski trip? plz update more soon!
| Reviewed By: UnfortunateFortunate On: April 30, 2006 11:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow~! I'm amazed! I've read fanfiction for about 4 years now, and I've only recently began reading Prince of Tennis fanfiction (About, you know, 3 days ago... It's sad, I know), and this is been my favorite so far! And it's much more well written then most fanfiction out there! Good job! If you were hoping for a published author status, you could get there very easily! =D
| Reviewed By: Eien_Kisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 13:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww! I swear this has to be the best Echizen/Tezuka fanfiction i've read in a long time! This is so great!! Please update the 5th chapter soon, please or i'll go mad!! I think its just so cute that Echizen is trying so hard to woo Tesuka, even though on the outside he doesn't appear to care that much. ^_^ Ha Echizen was jealous of Atobe!!! ^_^_^_^_^ Never think i'll see the day! Update soon, please!
| Reviewed By: Jaimes Keeper of Time [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah! That was cruel! Not a conventional cliffhanger by any stretch of the imagination, but a cliffie all the same! I really would like to see more of this fic, and I can't wait to see how their game ends! They do make such a cute couple though, don't they? *grins* Well, keep it up, ne! Good luck ont he next parts! Til nex'ime -J
| Reviewed By: Hoseki On: September 16, 2005 15:03 CDT
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I was mainly a Momo/Ryo fan, but I suddenly got into Tez/Ryo and there are not that many fics out there based on this pair. When I came across this fic I was quite excited because not only does it have my pair, but it's also written quite well. Only downfall is, you haven't updated in ages!!! And you left off at a crucial point as well *le sigh* I hope you take up to writing this soon, and perhaps, if it's no trouble, if you'd email me and let me know if you decide to continue on...don't wanna get my hopes up every time I come to look for an up'd like other fics. anyways email is: inuyashas_hoseki69@yahoo.com I truely want to see where you take this story, so don't just leave this one left out there. Thanks! Houseki
| Reviewed By: koinu-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2005 08:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i never did like tezu/ryo but this one has changed my mind ^^
| Reviewed By: Zen10 On: March 09, 2005 09:44 CST
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Thank you for that wonderful story! Hope to see Chapter 3 soon! :-)
| Title: The Wild Card (Ch. 2)
Reviewed By: Zen10 On: March 09, 2005 09:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm... You captured Fuji's essence of character perfectly! Quite very true, he had to stop his sweetly-manipulative probe when he received Tezuka's serious warning in his cool gaze! How wise of him to step off for a while & think of how to pull his strategy off well! If not, it is even more worse! Tezuka's not someone who is not to be trifled with; really scary! Mm... How interesting this thought of Fuji, refering to Ryoma's concerned warning against his go-overboard curiosity. It gave me an insight of their good friendship. Seems that Ryoma knows Fuji's character too well, that he had to speak straight to him. But, anyway Fuji go ahead with his plan, believing that repercussions could be dealt with later. How sweet of him. He is one of my favorites, besides Ryoma & Tezuka! :-) Awesome! Fuji's art of persuasion is scary. But he is a good guy, with smiling warmth in his heart. Just that he is too fond of playing with something thrilling & mysterious. At least, he did not burn himself too seriously. Moreover, no one is hurt so far. Oh, my! Atobe is interested in Tezuka too! How exciting for me to see how far Atobe & Ryoma compete to win Tezuka's heart. Oh, I see that Atobe is quite anxious after having heard the wildfire news about Ryoma's bold love confession. How endearing! So now, he hastened his plans at a faster pace! Whoa. Finally, Tezuka got the hidden meaning of Fuji's departing words after meeting by chance & talking to Atobe. How shall he deal with | Reviewed By: Zen10 On: March 09, 2005 08:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo, NO worry about Ryoma & Tezuka being OOC! :-) Well, they are quite alike as they are in PoT manga & animation. Quite realistic! You have a good knowledge of what this bookstore is like, as if they did exist in real life, talking as usual. Not so bad. Their conversation is very enjoyable & enlightening. Indeed, an interesting discovery of their reading preference! Tezuka's quiet thoughts on Ryoma's bold move & frightening intense focus, are quite a kind of precise veracity. True, he does know that Ryoma is simply not a type of person who would take advantage of him. But somehow, I think that Ryoma could do something unexpected. Of course, he has the good capacity of doing anything wild that he put his strong mind on. Tezuka is a type of person who usually thinks objectively on some issues, without getting himself emotionally worked up. Ryoma's quote: "Tennis isn't living" is quite a cool fact, a sort of philosophical intrigue! Besides that, I am very curious on how he is living in the life of the world-famous tennis celebrity. All the more, how did he cope with the daily pressure of living with fame, world media's relentless scrutiny? Most importantly, if ever they become a loving couple, then how will Tezuka cope with the mass media's irritating interference? I am very delighted to see them finally using the first-name basis of greeting! It is a first step of building something nice! :-) Hey, please do update soon!
| Reviewed By: Zen10 On: March 09, 2005 07:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! Kind of nice to see the ultra-confident Ryoma wooing his former captain, Tezuka! :-) It is great to see Ryoma become a living legend in tennis world!!! I do enjoy reading this kind of italic description about his worldly fame. Really very nice to see Tezuka's face cracking up a bit when asked such a shocking Q. For once, it shows that he is simply a human with unique emotions & thoughts. Quite interesting to see what their date's progress is like, given their stoical personalities they have. I am keen on what this relationship is like in later chapters. Definitely for sure, it is a very good Ryo/Tez fic. Please update soon!
| Reviewed By: ichibango On: February 11, 2005 02:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh, so good, there aren't too many good tezu/ryo fics out there so i congratulate you it was so lovely it made me forget i was sad about that one oishi eiji fic i read... anyway update soon, love your fic
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