|
| "Actions" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: ShagsChain [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 01:05 CST
Comment/Review:
wow. a little twisted. crazy, but i like it. different is always fun, great job on it. i thought it had been kagome talking from the beginning, so i had to go back and reread the first half, quite ingenious. :)
| Reviewed By: Xaenthe *nsi* On: February 02, 2005 01:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Whoa...I am...so confused...What happened to the old chapter that was there? Wasn't it something different? Weird. How sad, though! That last line just hit me like a ton of bricks, about actors not acting outside the script that they wrote for themselves? I was like "... Shit. That's deep." *Takes a moment and re-evaluates life* Well done, but the parts are confusing, so lemme get this straight. Miroku hurt Sango, so Sango took over Kagome's boyfriend, InuYasha, who was feeling torn between Kagome and Kikyou, who I presume to be his ex-girlfriend? So they were like, two confused people taking comfort in each other. Kagome, hurting like all hell, married Kouga instead? And now Miroku has waltzed back into Sango's life and she's regretting her choice with InuYasha? Lol, I think you just summed up an entire daytime soap opera in one chapter!!! But seriously. That last line. Ouch. I think I'm going to write that somewhere, like my backpack or my whiteboard or something. Awesome, power-packing sentence! Happy writing! ~Xaenthe
|
|
|
