| "Heero's Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 06:34 CDT
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Kawaii! This fic is sooo great! Heero is soooooo cute and the way Duo stole those kisses.....pure art! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 20:30 CST
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That...was...so...freakin'............weird.
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Reviewed By: Vidalark [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 19:55 CST
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this story is just to kawaii. please continue
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 18:24 CST
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I was just reading over your reviews. Geez...give d k a break! This is a good fic even if she doesn't have a obvious plot. None of mine do! Well except for maybe two our of eight. Anyways, there is a character limit. I just wanted to say that *I* like your fic and from the other reviews, other people like your fic to. Keep up the good work. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 09:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squeals* That was such a wonderful fic!!!!! Duo and Heero thinking the same thing. OHhHHHHH! Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 08:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey gonna keep going? This is a very funny fic and J isn't an ass (for the first time). I like it.
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Reviewed By: renee_dmrs [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2005 15:48 CST
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FUNNY, FUNNY, Funny!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mynona On: February 02, 2005 03:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story beginns disturbingly simmilar to Madam Hydra's Mechanics of Control... it's very simmilar, if you don't look at the way it's written. It does steer away from her fic in the second chapter but it's nagging anyway. Now I'm going to tell you what my swedish teacher always said: "Descriptions!" Altrough you know exactly what's going on, we, the readers, cannot read your thoughts so you have to learn what to actally put down. And that is everything... more or less. You don't give enough information about the suroundings or the characters, neither about their looks nor how they behave. This makes the story not. It makes a screenplay. And (aren't I on a roll today) even in fanfic every move a character makes and every thought he/she thinks must be backed up by reason. Fanfic is easier than orginal fiction this way because we all know the background for the chracters and therefore we have an inclining to what they'll do in different situations, the very core of OOC's and IC's. YOu are not in any of the cathergories since you haven't stoped to ask why yet.
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Reviewed By: //Schmoogy On: January 28, 2005 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I thought it was good. I think you should carry on with this. Don't let weird reviews bring you down. I look forward to the next chapter.
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