Reviewed By: Disgusted On: May 26, 2005 22:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Are you serious? This wasn't even a story, you just wrote the lyrics to a song and added a few words and actions to it. Also her dialouge sounds really off. You should take one word and do that and not try to make all of her words sound southern. Basically you need a lot more practice before you actually deserve to put another story on here.
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