| "Saiya-jin Dreams Arc: Only Dreaming" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 07:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
There was no way I could not read this. I read the second part first but it didn't ruin either one-shot. I'm normally not into the bondage and rape thing but this was worthy of being read. You're really good at this. Please write more to this series.
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Reviewed By: bunnicle [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 23:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God Damn it! you better not end it there! i'll kick your sorry ass if you don't continue! grrr
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Reviewed By: ChibiHoshi On: February 16, 2005 22:59 CST
Comment/Review:
To read the rest of this fic, please go and read Falling in Love. it contains the RL lemon that comes after for Goku and Vegeta.
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Reviewed By: lordofthepies On: February 16, 2005 13:07 CST
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It ends here? I hope not, but either way, I really enjoyed reading this- you write well in first person narrative. I do hope you eventually make more to it, because it does have potential to have more- and the lemon in the dream was fantastic!
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Reviewed By: 6546546 On: January 29, 2005 23:21 CST
Comment/Review:
it's kinky, i'll give you that. next time put a rape warning too. um, I'm speachless, next chapter bring goku back to reality, and have Vegeta play along with his little slave fetish. * shrug * You have a good thing going, please don't leave it here.
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