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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 08:56 CDT
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*laughs at the ending* i loved it! With this one I don't have the feeling that should be more to it and the ending doesn't feel permnant, especially how it brought us back to them with their differeces...haha man I didn't think that Heero would ...be in that position and then say the word perfect *snickers then huggles authoress* Keep putting that pen to paper and those fingers to keys, 'cuz you're one hell of a writer. More 'Instincts' please!!!
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: September 20, 2005 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a really great stroy..lol i really liked the ending and all..that was so funny with Sally's lunch..anyway i just love ur writting and wanted to let u know that i really like ur book..i ordered it off amazon..^_^
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 19:28 CDT
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*cheers* Yay!! Happy ending time!! The last few chapters were the best. *Cackles* Oh! I loved Une's reaction when they returned to preventers!! *Cackles some more* ^____^ I love ur action sequences because they're always easy to visualize. Arghh!! But the suspense just kills me!! I like these three together, and i like even more how you portray them together. I loved it, only wish that there was more! *Squeals and glomps 1x2x5* They are just too luvable!! ^__^
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Title: The End?
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 05:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Loved it! Is it really the end? I guess it should be;it's the perfect place for it. I just loved the whole thing. It was wonderfully written and I loved the plot. You wrote a slightly older version of them that was easy to see and wonderful to watch. I will enjoy looking forward to any of your future stories! ^_^ ~NekuYasha
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Reviewed By: Futile Faith On: September 03, 2005 03:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great!! That last scene made me laugh. Teamwork all the way ;D
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 19:56 CDT
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*snicker* let's hear it for teamwork ^_~ I liked the moment Wufei realized that Heero could not have done better than he had to save Duo at the start of the fic. That was probably a growing experience for 'Fei, though it might take some time to trickle through his brain :)
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2005 15:43 CDT
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I apologize for the length of time between reviews;Catching up R/L things. But I took the time to catch up a few of my fave stories. I love this one! Poor Duo. Confidence and mortality...quite a mix. I can't wait to see where this goes! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 12:21 CDT
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lol please continue.... i like the lunch theft
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Title: O.o ^_^
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2005 14:49 CDT
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Every chapter just gets better! I love these guys together! And you have a great way of showing their little idiosyncricies and how they deal with all of it and each other. Kudos! Keep it up!! ^_^
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 02:16 CDT
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O my deity! it is one of te most erotic scenes ever, includin te sower scene and te bed... I LOVE IT!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 19:52 CDT
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(I'm finally catching up on my reading a bit)They're sorting out the details ^__^ It's hard enough when it's just two people, I can't imagine how three damaged guys like that can figure things out. Nice and hot when they do though! Wheee!
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: June 25, 2005 13:22 CDT
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LOvely, I really like they in a threesome. Congratulations.
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: June 24, 2005 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was nice (wtf? nice? anyway...) That was very good (as usual) so please keep going. I liked Quatre's reactions (and Duo's reactions to his reactions...)
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Reviewed By: priscel---- On: June 09, 2005 17:14 CDT
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*Blushes* oh wow... *speechless* I'm glad they crossed that bridge, wow wasn't expecting that though *snickers* maybe heero reconsider being seme as their relationship progresses.
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 06:31 CDT
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Well, at least Heero is open minded. This is a great story. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2005 22:48 CDT
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Ouch, long hard road full of bumps and potholes and the occasional Missing Bridge Ahead. Damn, threesomes are probably hard enough as it is, without all that crap added on to it. I wonder why Wufei reacted so strongly to that tease/insult. It seemed to really get him where it lived if he'd grab Duo like that. And poor Heero *snuggles*
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 09:27 CDT
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Weeee! Another well written chap. Finally all three of them are together. I hope it works out and we get a lemon soon. See next time!
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Title: Awwww.....
Reviewed By: NekuYasha :) On: May 08, 2005 13:53 CDT
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Sorry I haven't reveiwed lately, been busy. Just got to read the last couple of chapters...They're great! I love how you write these guys! I love how Duo sprung the news on both of them; very Duo-ish! Just glad the other two were understanding enough not to throttle him! :) Now all they have left are all the 'little' details...oh yay. It should be rather amusing to see how they work through all that! Can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 19:16 CDT
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Ye-ah, Heero being a good deal brighter than a movie character, Duo's little trick was bound to not work. Still, it got them where they wanted to be! That's what counts. Now aaaall the little details to work out ^__^
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Reviewed By: live4you [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 18:17 CDT
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I loved this chapter.How Duo decided to tell Heero was so funny and very Duo.Loved Heero coming back and raising his hand that had me cheering.I'm looking forward to reading how they make this work so write more soon.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: May 07, 2005 17:16 CDT
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Yeay! At least Heero is game for it! I can't wait to read about the trials that they will face ahead, about dating, first kisses, first times and if they will settle for a long term relationship. Update soon and keep up the wonderful job!
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: May 07, 2005 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was fun and sweet! Update soon, please! It was so sweet my teeth hurt! They're finally together, so get them *together* soon, please!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: April 23, 2005 17:18 CDT
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Oh! Now you have to update this fic and you better update soon! It's getting to the best part! Oh! Pretty please update soon and keep up the wonderful job!
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Reviewed By: live4you [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 14:02 CDT
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Hmmm just wondering how Duo is going to break this bomb shell on Heero.Love this chapter the interaction between Wufei and Duo was perfect.I think it took lots of guts for Wufei to actually admit his feelings about both to Duo.Cant wait for Heero's reactions.Please continue soon
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Reviewed By: Silver thorns On: April 21, 2005 12:48 CDT
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Ooh it's about time. Hmm so now it's Duo's turn to step up to the plate, so to speak. Hope things go well but it will be so much more interesting if it doesn't!^_~
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 18:59 CDT
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"...Their Queen, a -" "Beautiful, large breasted woman," Duo interjected. "With a remarkable lack of morals," Wu Fei added" *Laughs then smiles* I'm glad you updated! and what an interesting turn of events. Now i'm itching to see how thigns turn out when Wuffers steps out and leaves Duo alone with heero, i hope his ulcers don't act up.
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 18:54 CDT
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Lol, Duo jumps him, then wonders why Wufei can't get more than splutters out for a short while. I did one of those insane giggle things at the 'kiss of death' suggestion, though that might not have been too far off ^^; The suggestions about getting Heero in 'lay a trap'/'be honest' says a lot about their respective characters ^_^ Gotta love these guys. Heero don't stand a chance.
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Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: April 20, 2005 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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As usual, the boys can't read non-verbal clues and don't realize that they all like each other...oh, well. Please keep going! I really love it, so please update soon. Duo being so unsure after the kiss was really precious.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: April 20, 2005 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story please keep writeing .....
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 13:49 CDT
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Hey! I really like this story. Everyone is in character and Duo is being.....Duo. Wouldn't have him any other way. I love this fic. Opps already said that. Looking forward to your next Update.
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