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Reviewed By: telosphilos, not logged in On: March 11, 2005 09:09 CST
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I liked the Sasuke short story. It was particularly good. For another short, you might want to do a friendship bit between Lee and Naruto as an aside to the Gaara and Sakura bit. I would also love to see the kids get to be members of the Ninja Academy without Sasuke to be there for their first day.
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Reviewed By: kookie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 18:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting match, Gaara and Sakura. I love your style of writing. That was a nice story. All that happened in such a short story and it works. Good job!
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