| "How??" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Zhekee [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2008 17:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good, feels very realistic to the tv-series and books.
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Title: Sorry
Reviewed By: Fuyuna [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2008 06:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry, when i read over my review, it sounds like i didn't appreciate your story. I'm sorry. That wasn't my intention. Your story is unique. I have never read B/V from this point of view before. i just want to say, i'm not suprise about Yamcha loss Bulma while he wasn't a cheated b*****d. Ok, that's all. Sorry, don't take my previous review as a flame ok
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Reviewed By: Fuyuna [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2008 06:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
You know, even with your story from Yamcha side, it's not make me regret about B/V. But i do pity Yamcha even before i read your story. And i'm glad he can accept B/V. Maybe just like Toriyama sensei said, they just lost the passion between them. And i'm gladly accept that if it for the better. Wish you better luck Yamcha
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Reviewed By: Kichi On: March 19, 2002 02:52 CST
Comment/Review:
that was very good. You feel ba for Yamcha, yet you feel good knowing that he' not in denial or something stupid. He's not that bad if you ignore the fact that he's a pussy. |
Reviewed By: Ember On: October 28, 2001 17:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow that was great! Totally original and extremely well written. Thank you it was a pleasure to read. |
