Reviewed By: trekkie54 On: January 30, 2005 00:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well... it was a good idea, but it was kinda sketchy. Jumped around like. You shouldn't have left out so much, you could have developed it more and made a real fic out of it. Oh well. Good idea ^^
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