| "Here I sit again" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Yoko Oro [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 10:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Your two other reviewers can go to Hell. Your rhyme sceme kicks ass!
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Reviewed By: KagomeStanton [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 11:01 CST
Comment/Review:
i like your poems!!! maybe you should make a rhyming one though... or maybe a happy one, though it doesn't seem your style. i really like your style of writing but be carefull about your syllables and i can't spell for my life. you are a really good poem writier so you should definately update soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: the sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 21:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Here's Your Reveiw!!! position-repitition-condition sounds odd, and try to make each line a phrase, its a bit awkward to carry it over. (that line where it starts with of) Good theme, sounds nice, doesnt flow as well though.
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