| "Destination Assasination" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: animamangawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i luv it ^_^ you must write more... plz it sounds really good
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Reviewed By: Wobbly [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aH PLZ UPDATE! like this pairing and the story might develop in an interesting way! it's up to you my dear friend =P
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Reviewed By: akikaze [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Well.
Reviewed By: teh-noise [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, first off, you've moved too quickly along in the story- at least for my tastes. Especially the bit where you blantly stated that Naruto and Sakura had been longtime friends- You could've shown that. And there's a lot of dialouge, but I don't think that the amount of description/action balances it out. And you put an author comment right smack dab into the story, disrupting the reading flow. But keep writing, I'm sure you'll get better, this isn't a bad start! ^-^
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