| "Wild Magic" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: adorable akane On: September 09, 2003 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more! N make sure she kicks ass! |
Reviewed By: Kuroi Doragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2002 17:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
good start but as stated in the review by Darak you need to fix the plot holes somewhere along the line or redo the prologue. |
Reviewed By: gourrina_chan2@yahoo.com On: October 30, 2001 21:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I love your story but sorry if I misinterpare I get this feeling that you jsut used ranma as you start your story but later you are going to used only lina for your story???
And is this a slayer type story????
If this will be a slayer cross will you put Luna into the story it definately will be intresting
bye for now...
from gourrina_chan your story reader.... |
Reviewed By: Darak On: October 31, 2001 02:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Not a bad fic overall, but there is a lack in the development of the story, how did Lina's brother become evil, why did they want to kill her mother, why is Lina basically not that good in magic (weak digger bolt of end scene) when her brother and father could cast a curse on her that had almost no effects (when it killed her mother) finally why is Lina's skill in martial arts absent since she is ranma with all his memories ?
So many questions, so little answers.
Oh and why is this a songfic ?
Keep writing nevertheless I'm waiting to see what you'll do from now ^____^ |
