| "Magic Knight Rayearth: When Two Worlds Collide" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: D-chan On: October 30, 2001 14:14 CST
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It's hard to find a good Magic Knight Rayearth fic, and from what I've seen, you've gotten off to a great start. Good job! |
Reviewed By: Umi-chan On: October 30, 2001 20:07 CST
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I don't know how much I like this so far...it's so short I can't make too many opinions. As for the writing style it seems good and I'm interested in what the heck is going on. I dunno...I think I'll like it. At least I hope so... |
Reviewed By: gourrina_chan On: October 30, 2001 21:32 CST
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I love your story and I would like to read more in the future. I would also like that you would
e-mail me if you decide to update your story
my mail is gourrina_chan2@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: D-chan On: October 31, 2001 15:26 CST
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Nice first chapter! I'm now officially interested. |
Reviewed By: Firestorm_244 On: October 31, 2001 22:04 CST
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I'm very interested to see where this fic goes... I can't wait till you write more. |
Reviewed By: Umi-chan On: November 01, 2001 14:09 CST
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I'm interested as well. Your first chapter was written well, using a lot of figurative language and andjectives. I'm impressed but annoyed...your chapters are awfully short and that damn cliffhanger! Get the next chapter up soon! |
Reviewed By: e-chan hidaka On: November 07, 2001 20:28 CST
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wow...this is very interesting! I like it so far. When I saw the title I was like yay a rayearth fanfic. Keep it up! I can't wait til you get the next chapters up. Oh yeah to your last question should it be a umi/clef or umi/ascot? I like umi and clef together...but ascot good too. ok i'll shut up now! lol! *Runs and pops Rayearth DVD in the dvd* |
Reviewed By: Jeff On: November 09, 2001 21:05 CST
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On the advice of a good friend of mine, D-chan, I read this. I think it is well-written enough to deserve its rating. Your idea is interesting and well thought out. I like you going from Tokyo to Cephiro and I hope you continue with that. Hope you update soon! |
Reviewed By: Sano On: November 14, 2001 18:39 CST
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Okay I've been reading your fic but have yet to review. Your latest chapter started out good but then it sort of just...ended. Like you got bored writing it and just wanted to finish. But it's still good. Really good, actually. 9. |
Reviewed By: Umi-chan On: November 14, 2001 18:44 CST
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Um...I'm sorry. I accidentally voted this a 7 instead of a 9 as I meant to...jeez. The rating went down and I feel horrible. I'm really sorry...I'll vote it its desrving rating when it allows me to. Sorry again. Your story is great. Don't think someone sabotaged it or anything. Just someone stupid... |
Reviewed By: IceMaiden On: November 15, 2001 04:19 CST
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That's okay, Umi-chan, it happens. :) I was not very happy with my last chapter, however, and am pulling it. I'll repost it when it's more pollished. |
Reviewed By: Umi-chan On: November 15, 2001 19:21 CST
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I'm glad you aren't mad IceMaiden, though I didn't think you would be. What's a few point thingys? Well the rating went back to where it should be so I don't feel so bad anymore. Get that chapter up soon! |
Reviewed By: Angelina Vernon On: November 17, 2001 21:16 CST
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I dunno... I'm not particuarly a fan of fanfics all that much because most are absolutely horrid, but yours is one of the better ones i've seen. You might want to work on your dialouges... All of your characters talk the same way and with almost perfect english. Don't you think the little kids of the teenagers would speak differently to their elders than they would to their friends? Just something to ponder. And perhaps your descriptions could use some polishing. The description of the car is odd... I just really hate it when someone says "of some sort" I dunno... it just seems to me that EVERYONE uses that phrase in fanfics where new objects are appearing. I know i've done it once or twice myself. |
Reviewed By: IceMaiden On: November 19, 2001 14:01 CST
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Thank you for the very helpful review. I'll go back over my work and try to fix it up a little. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Golden Shadow (melancholy_shadow@hotmail.com) On: November 19, 2001 17:48 CST
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Just beautiful. I hope to see more of this. Could you email me whenever you update? ^^
GS-over and out! Peace! ^^ |
