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| "I Will Be With You" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 03:57 CST
Comment/Review:
O.K., so it's official. I REALLY like your stories! This one made me cry. I don't like angst or death-fics, (Even though I have written them. Go fig.) but this was a really good story. Keep it up!
| Reviewed By: Sean-bloody mary take the name already On: February 11, 2005 00:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was an interesting fic. I too dislike death-fics, simply becase people tend to go all moody and forget to tell the story. I noticed a little (lot) of OOC with Heero, but it worked well within the story. in your post script you state that you were going for angst. hate to break it to you but your angst sucks, your WRITING & STORY on the other hand where very well done. as a personal comment I did enjoy your handling of Wufei (all two lines of him), most people do rather make him way to emotional. can't coment on your spelling and such, didn't notice any glaring mistakes, (i'm not one to talk. ;-) all in all, I rather enjoyed the story. thank you.
| Reviewed By: DK_Joy not signed in On: February 10, 2005 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate death fics, but this wasn't bad at all. It was very cute and I liked it a lot.
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