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"Only Time Will Tell" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: :::..reader...:::  On: August 01, 2003 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
the style was ok, grammer could use a littl work but was fine, loved the story originalit/creativity phenomenal loved it. Like I said loved it i found it entertaining to read over all i would have gave u a 12 but it only went up to 10. ps: i think u should write a continuation. Herro did seem a little ooc though but benevolently writen story keep up the good work.
 Reviewed By: Zowe [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 24, 2002 00:15 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Aw, the ending was so sweet, I really liked it. Heero seemed a bit ooc at times, but given the nature of the story that's to be expected. I sort of wish you had included more about how it all happened, you know just a bit about the party and morning after. anyway, nice job, i really enjoyed it.

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