| "What!" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: beep On: October 15, 2006 19:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
please! please! post the next chapter pllllllleaassssee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! want to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: neat On: September 26, 2006 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked the story update soon.
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Reviewed By: pocky_lover On: August 05, 2005 09:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
IT'S JUST TO GOOD.PLEASE UPDATED.
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Title: what!
Reviewed By: baby_red On: February 13, 2005 11:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was good. Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Blackrose451 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok i really like the story but...your spelling is ok but not as it should be. Spell check before you post.PLEASE USE COMMAS SEMICOLONS AND ALL THE OTHER STUFF! (don't feel like typing out all the other stuff) you should go over it a couple of time then post it up again! i'm trying not to be rude or anything i like the story and all but ya need to do the things that make a story greater that great! trust me when people tell me that i have to correct things i never do and it makes my stories bad...thats why i'm trying to help you with your story so it doesn't get flammed. some times flames will get you mad but you have to along with it forget them and ignore it. it hurts to get flammed i know because i have got flammed a couple of times but i ignored them or even tried challangeing them to write a better flame. i don't care if you ignore what i'm typing now but atleast try... for all the other readers that will come to love your story like i do. if you ever need help just e-mail me at moonbunny45@comcast.net or blackrosekitten451@yahoo.com just tell me that your the author of what!(might want to capitalize What!) thank you for reading this srry its so long but its the truth. Also what is teh pairing? please don't make it a kag/inu there are to many out there or have the reviewers vote for a pairing i do that! but ya don't have to if you don't want to! i can't beleive this is more than forteen-thousand and fifteen words!WEll g2g off to help other writers! Ja Ne! bye bye
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