| "Did You Ever Love Me?" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: My answer
Reviewed By: Lala gurl On: September 01, 2005 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Post it. It's really good and you shouldn't just tease people with that first chapter. It might just kill them. LOL!! LUV it!!! Post it soon!! ;p
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Reviewed By: oz On: March 12, 2005 08:38 CST
Comment/Review:
yo post it post it post it there are too little g/c fics out there it it would sort of resolve this fic so post it
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Reviewed By: Irish Whisky Syrup [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 04:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should post the second chapter. There's too few G/CC lemons now days here and it always just makes good to post a chapter or a story. I really liked this chapter. It was pretty normal for a G/CC fic. Almost every G/CC fic is like that as every B/V fic is centered in the 'famous three years' and every Vi/Gh is when Gohan goes to school...sigh... No offense but it just seems that authors now days don't write anyhting else than the same old again and again. No matter how orginal they claim their story to be it's the old same time after time... Just an advice for you. This is your first story and it was good for your first story but heed my words above. You'll make a wonderful author with a little practise! Love your story! Hope to get more of them from you!(I'm a major G/CC fan!) Sorry if this seems like a flame, but it's not. Just my poor attempt at constructive crticism. Writies!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: super saiyan 4 chichi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sounds good, what is the time in this fic, because you mentioned Goku having a tail so I thought it might be in DBGT, also is he Super Saiyan 4 because the only time he is an adult with a tail is when he's like that. I'm just curious...Update SOON, I like this fic.
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Reviewed By: MysterySaiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2005 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought your story was very good. It has addicted me and that doesn't happen very often. I really like your story and would love it if you posted the second chapter soon!!! ^_^ I love it soooo much!!!
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