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Reviewed By: AngelicDevil [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2010 15:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I'm so enthralled with this I love it!!! I'm not sure how to tell you how much I love it so you'll have to take my word for it. Please don't stop writing!!!!! :D
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: yamikitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to update this. I loooooooooove it. I want to know what's going to happen to Kael and Ava. Mar is a perverted hentai lunatic.... How are you going to kill him? Please update!!! I don't know if two days ago was your birthday (Nov. 2) but Happy Birthday anyway. I care. ^_^ If you still need a beta I'm free. I love beta-ing. My email is yamikitsune@gmail.com
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Reviewed By: GothicaCuddle [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 09:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really am enjoying your sytle of writing the story! i hope everything gets in order for you so that more chapters may grace us. keep up the good writing! its amazing really..
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Title: mew?
Reviewed By: Jessiey On: July 25, 2005 02:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to finnish!! Please, Please, Please! ^_^;; i wanna know what happens... how do they excape... mew... do they die? does the boy from the begining show up and save them? do they somehow overpower and kill the 'bad man'??? i wanna know!!! nugh!!!! please?? U.U ok, i'll stop...
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Title: please hurry with chapter 9
Reviewed By: hylie On: July 22, 2005 16:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
please hurry up and write chapter 9... ive been waiting for months
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Reviewed By: tookie On: July 20, 2005 03:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok... im not really gonna give u any inspiration or w/e... i jus wanted to say that i love this story... first off... its very interesting and kinda suspenseful and adventurous... but mostly... it has a very nice sexual content so i enjoy readin the story... but i do have a suggestion... i think u should turn this story into a movie once ur finished... well i cant wait for chapter 9
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Title: splendid
Reviewed By: bobness27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 23:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
wonderful! i love your style of writing and will be reading anything you write! thank you for putting your wonderful story here!
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Reviewed By: ^^ On: March 09, 2005 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't normally write reviews because I'm not good at expressing what I mean but you must continue to write! I really love this fic!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: love your story! On: March 07, 2005 21:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't usually write reveiws -_-... this is a great fic! please continue writing it, it's a very interesting world and plot you've created here! i love the characters (except Mar *hiss*)! don't be discouraged by people like me, who almost never reveiw anything they read! they probably all love the story, we're just to lazy... keep writing!
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Reviewed By: DefCon On: March 07, 2005 01:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with Nathan's sentiments entirely. I find it shocking that there are so many uninspired, unoriginal fics on this site that have multitudes of reviews, whereas your fic only has 7. I read your FF8 fic and enjoyed it, so I decided to check what else you had written. I must say that I didn't think I would become as intested with the characters as I did; your writing style is symplistic, not as bogged down with flowery writing as certain other authors I could mention, but you still manage to craft a very solid and complete story. I feel so sad for Kael and Ava, and I hope that they'll have some sort of happy reconciliation. Also, just a side note, but the picture of Mawth's dimpled, be-freckled cheeks made me giggle.
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Reviewed By: KP On: February 28, 2005 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue your story~ ^_^ I am enjoying it very much!!
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Title: O.O GOOD JOB
Reviewed By: djs8310 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 21:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I have to say is, Wow.....Being an avid writer, I've always tried to come up with Original stories....But you, you make it look easy. Heh. Very good job. djs8310 aka Neutral Love
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Reviewed By: Healix J. Srooneth On: February 27, 2005 13:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is beautifully writen. im very eager to see the next chapters. just one word can say it: wow. theres no words to say my feelins on this fanfic it is truely a wonderfull story one you should be happy of, and of the grammer and spelling.
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Reviewed By: Kia Rene On: February 27, 2005 03:57 CST
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I really like this story! Love the attention you pay to details and the imaginary world you created! *claps* I would certainly be looking out for this story in the future! You certainly deserve more reviews; it's just too sad how apathetic readers can be. You write very well: no typos, good flow, arresting storyline. Keep it up! ps: I think I know why there are so few reviews... it's so bloody hard to leave a review with all the "Error: Missing Information!" and Spam Filter hindrances... This is my 4th try!
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Title: Why do you have only 1 review???
Reviewed By: Ai no Sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 12:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe only ONE person has reviewed your fic! I think, as an authoress myself, it's important to let the author know if their work is worth posting! But to the actual review; I love your style of writing! It's easy, yet interesting to read... And a little yaoi ain't bad... ^_~ I hope you intend to continue this, 'cause I'd really love to read more. Ava and Kael haven't even finished their playing... >_
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