Reviewed By: ryuu no ketsurui On: April 03, 2005 01:30 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow. Just...wow. That was...pretty darn close to perfection if I do say so myself. That was...just some absolutely breathtaking writing there. The way you portrayed Yugi and Atemu...it was done so wonderfully! To me, their character traits and nuances were done to a T. There wasn't an instance that really seemed out of character at all! The only thing that seemed odd to me was Atemu's mental imagery of Yugi as a cat. ^^ Kind of caught me off-guard there, but that description really allowed me to visualize what Yugi must've looked like at the time, so it's all good really. ^^ I also really like how Yugi's and Atemu's relationship is developing. It's nice to read something like this where those two are so affectionate with each other. -^-^- And Yugi and Atemu can sing! I really loved that. The singing. My, what I wouldn't give to really hear those two sing, I'll say that much! -^-^- Heehee. In other stories I've read, Yugi and Atemu were good at other things like dancing, writing, or drawing, but this is probably the first story where they're good at singing! I like that. I really like this story very much. The plot is moving along quite nicely, methinks. Well, enough of my prattering on and on about the story. ^^; Keep writing! I can't wait 'til the next update! I'll try and be sure to review then too! ^-^
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