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| "Just a Little Love" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: barisax On: June 05, 2005 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sooooooooo*pause for breath*ooooooo cute! I loved it! Heh, I can just imagine Atemu doing that, pretending to be asleep and all. And all the effort that Yugi put in to show his love...Awwwww....Thanks for writing this touching story! ^________________^
| Reviewed By: ryuu no ketsurui On: April 03, 2005 01:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow! That's so sweet! -^-^- Yugi baking cookies for Atemu! Heehee. I can only imagine Yugi in an apron, his face smudged with flour, an expression of absolute concentration etched on his features... x3 And Atemu! Him in his chair, reading that book about Napoleon, wondering just why Yugi threatened to kick him out of the house if he so much as took a step into the kitchen... x3 Such vivid descriptions! I could visualize it so well while I was reading the story! I must say, your mastery of language is wonderful. ^-^ It flowed so well in your writing! I hope to read more of your stuff, so please keep writing! Thank you so much for this incredibly sweet Valentines' Day story! ^-^
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