| "Of Dreams and Reality" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Title: Fantastic
Reviewed By: Ayanami-san [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 07:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very kawaii, in some weird way. It was a very lovely story. I can't wait for more... Update as soon as you can please.
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Reviewed By: Reader1 On: February 17, 2005 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fanfic was a good one, with few grammatical errors. It wasn't the first one showing the after effects of Enishi's Jinchuu and probably won't be the last. It was simple to digest and I salute you for that. Not overly long in description nor overly simple and straight. The style of writing is not quite something that is overly unique on its own. Perhaps you just need to break into the feeling of writing a new fanfic. It was enjoyable but not something to keep one on the edge of the seat. Keep writing. Good luck with future chapters.
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