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Reviewed By: ICYSTORM On: March 20, 2005 02:57 CST
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FORGOT SOMETHING WHEN I PUT THE APPERANCE. WHEN I SAID BLUE CENTER AROUND BLACK EYES I REALLY MENT BLACK PUPILS WITH A BLUE SUROUNDING K? BYE-Q! ^_~! (I DON'T OWN HAMTARO! ^_^U)
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Reviewed By: ICYSTORM On: March 20, 2005 02:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!! ^_~ OH AND FOR AN OC HERE YA GO NAME:TAKI NICKNMAE:ICY (CAUSE MY HEARTS AS COLD AS ICE) AGE:16 EYE COLOR:ICY BLUE HAIR COLOR:BLUE HEIGHT:SAME AS DAICHI (NOW, GUESS WHO I WANNA BE PAIRED WITH. COME ON YOU CAN DO IT) BEYBLADE COLOR:WHITE AND ICY BLUE BITBEAST:ICEBURGE BITBEAST APPERANCE((DO I REALLY HAVE TO TELL YOU IT'S ELEMENT AFTER ALL THAT(POINTS TO WHAT IS WRITTEN SO FAR))):ICE BLUE SPIDER WITH ALTERNATING BLACK AND WHITE STRIPES GOING DOWN THE LEGS,BLUE CENTER AROUND BLACK EYES, AND LONG, SHARP, BLACK FANGS ATTACKS:FROSTBITE AND POISON ICICLES PAIRED WITH:DAICHI WELL THERE YA GO. A NEW OC FOR YA K? BYE-Q! ^_~! (DOES NOT OWN HAMTARO! ^_^U)
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Reviewed By: Vysantha On: March 17, 2005 23:41 CST
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So funny haha! Definitely a good start! Can't wait till the other people arrive! XD
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Reviewed By: IcyQueen On: March 07, 2005 20:58 CST
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I'm be in it!Name: Esi Nickname: Snow Age: 17 Eye color: Right: black Left: blue Hair color: Short Sliverblue ^^ Height: 5'6 Beyblade colors: Light gray and blue Bitbeast: Aqua Bitbeast apperance and element: A White Huskey with Aqua amorror. Winter Who do you want to be paired up with?: Max Other: Esi used to live in Alaksa, and she dress like it winter
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Reviewed By: Ghost cheeth( not long in) On: March 07, 2005 20:53 CST
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U got Maiza down packed! I love it Update soon
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Reviewed By: Taya-Chan On: March 07, 2005 16:02 CST
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lolll it's funny XDDD it's not long but it's good ^^ and yuki's look like a real idiot XDDD but i don't care! it's more fun like this loll whatever!! i hope you'll gonna continue soon ^^
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Reviewed By: Vysantha On: March 06, 2005 00:00 CST
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Hey!Can't wait till you write it! Name: Raven Flyairth Nick: Raye Age: 14-15ish Eye color: Dark blueberry brown (blue or brown) Hair color: Dark brown-black Height: a bit shorter than Mystel! Blade colors: Emerald green with hints of blue purple and black Bitbeast: Karasu Appearance: Bird of darkness. Kinda like a pheonix but more raven like. Pair: Is Mystel taken? My god I love that guy. He's so cute and happy! sighs* I just love him! dreamy eyes* Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: kuramassweetestthing [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 15:50 CST
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i also forgot to mention, could you guys tell me what kind of bitbeast you have? (ex: my bit-beast is part falcon, part feline {mainly a panther}) i would really appreciate it! and for those who did give me that info, thanx! i give you guys imaginary hugs!
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Reviewed By: Ghost cheeth(not signed in) On: February 27, 2005 21:32 CST
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I forgot, Sunset Is a Red chinses drgon with golden wiskers and golden mane
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Reviewed By: Taya-Chan On: February 27, 2005 17:26 CST
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Oha yo! Hey, It look like a good idea this fic ^^ hehe ^^ Anyway! euhm... for my OC... this is it: °°°° Name: Yuki (it's a boy ^^ he's so cute!! and... he really look like a girl, by the way... (a little bit like Haku, from Naruto loll) ^^o) Nickname: N/A Age: 15 Eye color: Right: Gold (always hide by a bandage) Left: Silver Hair color: Silver ^^o and long ^^ Height: 5'4 Beyblade colors: Light Purple and blue Bitbeast: Kameha Bitbeast apperance and element: An Neko-Angel ^^o and... the element? Snow! Who do you want to be paired up with?: Euh... did you accept yaoi/shounen-ai/slash/whatever-you-call-it? if yes uh... Brooklyn!! ^^o And if no... euhm well... Julia!! ^^;; °°°° So that's it... well, I hope you'll gonna continue soon ^^ Let's go, I'm in your way!!! °°° By the way uhm... sorry if my english is bad, I'm french so... ^^;;;
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Reviewed By: Ghost cheeth( Not signed in) On: February 25, 2005 14:43 CST
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Mazia is Marah's Older twin sister. She is not like Mrah at All, she's more evil.
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Reviewed By: Ghost cheeth( Not signed in) On: February 25, 2005 14:40 CST
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Name: Mazia Nickname (if you have one): Zia Age: 16 Eye color: Red Hair color: Black but it's dye Blood red and Gold Height (*doesn't know why she needs it, but just added it for kicks*): 5'8 Beyblade colors (my blade is black and blue): Red and Gold Bitbeast (I'll tell you my bitbeast's name, her name is Falkita (pronounced: Fall-keet-a)): SunMoon Bitbeast apperance and element (doesn't matter if two people have the same element):Fire Who do you want to be paired up with? (ATTENTION: RAY AND KAI ARE TAKEN! Ray is with me, and kai is with my friend, ashley!): Lee
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