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Title: P.S.S.
Reviewed By: Kitsune0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 09:40 CDT
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I also think your stories are addicting for some strange reason. Please continue the story! :)
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Title: P.S.
Reviewed By: Kitsune0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 09:32 CDT
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Can you E-mail me when you get this please? I'm new here and I don't know if anybody's getting my messeges. Please and thankyou! :)
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Title: My character
Reviewed By: Kitsune0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 09:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Katrina Luna Morgan Nickname (if you have one): Luna, Wolfy, and Hyper-drunk Age: A year younger than Max Eye color: Rose red Hair color: Long, wavy, and black Height (*doesn't know why she needs it, but just added it for kicks*): A cm shorter than Max Beyblade colors (my blade is black and blue): Black and red Bitbeast (I'll tell you my bitbeast's name, her name is Falkita (pronounced: Fall-keet-a)): Nightshade Bitbeast apperance and element (doesn't matter if two people have the same element): A black wolf with flames surrounding her ankles. A darkness/fire wolf Who do you want to be paired up with: Max Tate
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Reviewed By: gothic girl3750 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please put me in your story i'm the one that sent you the 2 emails incase you didn't get the heres what they said: Name:Andrea Nick:andy(weird i know) Age:15 Eye Color:Blue Hair Color:Black Height: same as max's Blade Colors:Red and white with blue tips Bitbeast:Firestorm Appearence and element: Red cheetah with blue and white highlights in his fur. Fire Pair: How about Max?
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Title: can i be in ur story
Reviewed By: bisi On: September 20, 2005 12:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o.k if i could be in ur chapter TALA IS MINE just to make that clear anhow the story is very wierd which i love (cause i'm REALLy wierd) the names bisi by the way
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Title: arsome ness!!!!
Reviewed By: SpiralAyumuness [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 10:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fanfic is just awsome!!!!!!!! btw, can i be in there? Name:Kohna Nickname (if you have one):no nickname Age:12 Eye color:brown Hair color:dark brown Height (*doesn't know why she needs it, but just added it for kicks*):i dont know.. ^^; Beyblade colors (my blade is black and blue):black and yellow Bitbeast (I'll tell you my bitbeast's name, her name is Falkita (pronounced: Fall-keet-a)):um, Kersun Bitbeast apperance and element (doesn't matter if two people have the same element):wind/lightning/dark Who do you want to be paired up with? (ATTENTION: RAY AND KAI ARE TAKEN! Ray is with me, and kai is with my friend, ashley!):im actually max's cousin?
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Title: Forgot something....
Reviewed By: Mew Angel On: June 20, 2005 11:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm changing him age to 17. O & PLEASE PICK MINE!!!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!!:(
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Title: My Character
Reviewed By: Mew Angel On: June 14, 2005 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can u put my character in your fic.? Gender:male Name:Haru Age:1year older than hilary Eye color:medium-blue Hair color:blond; in a low braided pony-tail with 2 short bangs Height:6.1 Bayblade color: Black & sliver Bitbeast apperance:same color as bayblade; wolf bitbeast:woiveren Paried with:Hilary Note: hate tyson because he picks on her; if he does, he beats the s*** out of him! ^U^ (might beyblade him too)
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Reviewed By: Malestrom On: May 25, 2005 21:03 CDT
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Name:Alex Nick:None Age:15 Eye Color:Blue Hair Color:Black Height: same as tyson Blade Colors:Red with orange tips Bitbeast:Firestorm Appearence and element: Red wolf with orange highlights in his fur. Fire Pair: How about Mathilda?
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Title: oc's
Reviewed By: krisnshippo On: April 18, 2005 20:35 CDT
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Name: Draciel Nickname:ceil Age: 13 Eye color:purple Hair color:purple Height:5'2 Beyblade colors:purple Bitbeast:shen-long Bitbeast apperance and element:a dragon like tyson's but its black, and it a fire dragon. Who do you want to be paired up with: Max Name:yumiko Nickname:lucky Age:13 Eye color:green Hair color:red Height:5'6 Beyblade colors:Green Bitbeast:Red Bitbeast apperance and element:a white bird (kinded like kai's)with fire around it. Who do you want to be paired up with: Ozuma Name: Gold Nickname:Golden Age:13 Eye color:silver Hair color:silver Height:5'4 Beyblade colors:silver Bitbeast:Fordo Bitbeast apperance and element:a red ferret that element is earth. Who do you want to be paired up with: Micheal
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Reviewed By: Angels Tear On: April 13, 2005 19:48 CDT
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I'm really hoping you start soon so here's a character. Name:Yuna Blaze Nickname:Yun/Yunie Age:15(or whatever goes with your story) Eyes:sparkling Turqioused Hair colour:Navy blue with sky blue highlights. Height:5'5(whatever goes with your story again) Here's the personality if you need it but you don't have to use it you can do whatever you want with her except make her a Bimbo/Sl*t. Personality:She's very out going.and she's also a very kind and carring person but get her mad and you'll be sorry. Likes:Loves jumping on people and loves eating but never gains a pound(she's very lucky)loves scaring people and hanging with her frineds. Hates:people who try and steal her man. Paired with:Brooklyn or Tyson. Beyblades colour:Sliver and blue. Bitbeasts name:Slyfer(you can change it if you like) Bitbeasts Appearance:Large black Dragon with dark blue gems all over the dragons body.The Dragon has two very large wings and also has two very long tails. Element:Darkness, fire,and thunder/lighting.(you pick one or all it's your story after all) well I hope I've helped you and I can't wait till you have all the OC's you need to start the story because I really want to see what happens.byebye
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Reviewed By: Kiina Hisuterikku On: April 02, 2005 15:05 CST
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Hey! I wanna joint!! I wanna joint!! ^^o So here is it: Name: Sasori Nickname : dont have ^^ Age: uhm well... 16 Eye color: Red but a little bit pink Hair color: electrik blue Height: 5'7 Beyblade colors: Black Bitbeast : Daubus Fôn Bitbeast apperance and element : A big white scorpion ^^ Who do you want to be paired up with? Micheal ^^ Other: Normally, she first look weird but she's not ^^ lolll
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Reviewed By: Vysantha On: March 31, 2005 20:30 CST
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Not bad. It was pretty funny lol. Um anyway, please write more! Can't wait for the next part! I WANT A KAI PLUSHIE! ~.*
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Reviewed By: Yume-chan On: March 29, 2005 03:42 CST
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LOL! I hope you update your story soon! ^^ Name: Sora Hamasaki. Nickname: Sky. Age: 15. Eye color: soft blue. Hair color: Black with the tip dyed lite pink. the style is the same as Yuna's hair from ffx-2. personality: She's like the girl next door. Sweet, caring, funny, innocent and cute. But she's often sarcastic and can be very stubborn sometimes. She's a calm person but also has spunk, she's half the sugar twice the spice. Sora has a bit of a problem with authority. She doesn't care about rules and does things her own way. When she's pissed she can be just as cold, distant and emotionless as she wants. Sora's also humoristic and likes to pull pranks. If you befriend her you got a friend for life. She can speak English, Japanese, Chinese and Russian. Height: 5'3" Beyblade colors: Silvery blue & white. Bitbeast: Kage. Bitbeast appearance and element: White tiger, ice/snow. paired up with: Tala or Brooklyn.
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Reviewed By: ICYSTORM On: March 21, 2005 00:57 CST
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BITBEAST CHANGED FROM, ICE BLUE SPIDER WITH ALTERNATING BLACK AND WHITE STRIPES GOING DOWN THE LEGS, LONG, SHARP, BLACK FANGS, AND ATTACKS:FROSTBITE AND POISON ICICLES, TO, ICE BLUE SPIDER WITH BLACK STRIPES GOING DOWN THE SIDE, LONG, SHARP, WHITE FANGS ATTACKS:ICEBITE (STRONGEST) AND ACID FREZZE. WELL SINCE I HAVE NOTHING BETTER TO DO I WILL GO AND FIX MY PROFILE FOR THE OTHER STORY. BYE-Q! ^_~! (I DON'T OWN HAMTARO! ^_^U)
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