Reviewed By: EternalFlame5 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 21:17 CST
Comment/Review:
This story definately looks like it's gonna get good soon. Of course that's probably because you did an awesome job with the first chapter! I can't believe no one has reviewed yet, this story seems really interesting already!!! Advice? Ummm... I don't know, just make sure this story isn't the kind that only has little things happen one by one. If you take too much time in making things happen then things get boring. Not cool, of course, cy the looks of things I don't think I need to worry about that from you!!!
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