| "Sweet Seduction" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: eveforeverbroken On: March 04, 2005 09:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha this is a good one! don't stop writing:D make it longer! another chappie, another, another.. you get the poin
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Reviewed By: shaddowstalker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg ~_^ i luved this fic oh plez write more it was awsome it fit perfectly all in one chapter i hope u write more soon * if u've been bugged enough which i hope u have ~_^ * BI
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Reviewed By: paniwi. On: February 19, 2005 09:40 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm definitley bugging for another chapter, don't stop now, this could be something really good, (not that it isn't already) Anyway, nice lemon
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Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 14:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, I love it... ^_^ haha... didn't I say this already? oh well... write more lemons!
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Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: February 18, 2005 07:01 CST
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Intersting.... Where did you learn to write this kind of stuff so well? I gotta go there this is great. The lemon fitted in great and the rest of the story and seducing was just as good! Normally you get one great lemon writer or one great story writer that has to ask someone to write the lemon. Ryou must be really easy to seduce I should try it next time I fall into a portal into the TV. *sigh* Life really is unfair. I don't know if I want more because it's great as a one-shot but it would be nice to read some more about this story line. So do what you want and I can't wait to read more of your stuff. Thank You! DK;) P.S. Sorry for the rambling review I get carried away when I read this kind of stuff,(fanfiction, good fanfiction and things about Bakura/Ryou!)
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