| "You and Only You" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: fakeomens [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2009 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really, really disturbing. You REALLY need to put up warnings, NeekerBeeker is right. I wish I could completely remove this from my brain.
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Reviewed By: gddsinferno On: March 02, 2005 09:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
I will admit it took some guts to post a thing like this online but there is somethings that should be addressed to you. You really need intense warnings up through your chapters. Some people including myself can or will get offensive over the sex scenes. This story really was bland and didn't much of a plot going for it.
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Title: NeekerBreeker
Reviewed By: NeekerBreeker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 08:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry, but this fic really, really squicks me. Bicky is about 20 years younger than Ryou and Dee, and Ryou has adopted him. That means Bicky is his SON. Now, maybe you think parents making their children into sex toys is cool, but I find it offensive and I know I'm not the only one. Please, at least put up an incest warning if you're going to write a fic like this.
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