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| "Scars" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 15:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww Vegeta is such a prick. Well I certainly think you've done quite well telling this from Vegeta's POV. Is Goku commiting suicide? If so why isn't Vegeta stopping him?!?!?! Or maybe he's just going for a swim. Heh, sorry, I am easily confused, and I just refuse to believe that Goku will die! I really hope you are continuing with this fic, PLEASE don't leave it there! I'll review loads if you continue ;)
| Reviewed By: Love Of Vegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2005 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, that first chapter was soo sad, I hope things get better for Goku. This is a very interesting first chapter, I was immedietly drawn into this fic. BTW I LOVE your pen name! Too bad for you though cos Vegeta's all mine... heh just kiddin, okay- on to chapter 2!
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